You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers.

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Dear Mr Kaine, I am a student of

Microsoft

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Office Training (MST20) program in your institution. I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I would not be able to attend classes

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20th June onwards. I am hoping that you would allow me to continue the course with the

intake from October 2019. I work with a telecom company as an assistant researcher and due to some recently assigned projects, my job demands more of my time.

Besides

, I have some strict deadlines, ahead and to meet them, I will need to work a few extra hours each day.

Also

, I will travel to Australia at the beginning of July for some office tasks. All these new responsibilities in the job force me to pause my course for the time being.

However

, I am willing to complete my program as it would be highly beneficial for my career.

Therefore

I humbly request you to allow me to attend the

available batch.

This

would be helpful for me to manage my office work on the one hand and continue my course

on the other hand

. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Namrata Jain

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

201 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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