Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extend is globalisation a positive or negative development?

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Today our world has become one big interconnected economy. While earlier, many countries existed as individual markets, now they all functions together as gears in a machine. The continuous flow of
people goods and services
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people, goods and services
across national frontiers has undeniably influenced all aspects of life. Whether or not the changes brought on by
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phenomenon are beneficial, is,
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, often debated.
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essay will discuss the positive and negative outcomes of
globalisation
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in detail. The most important advantage of
globalisation
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is the easy availability of a variety of products at increasingly affordable prices. International trade received immense impetus because countries reduced import tariffs and other restrictions as a part of
WTO agreements
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the WTO agreement
WTO agreement
.
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led to the emergence of multinationals who expanded their operations all
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having come or been brought to a conclusion
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globe. If today it is possible to purchase Apple iPhones (which have their motherboards manufactured in the USA and body fabricated in a factory in china) in India, it is only because of
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phenomenon.
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, smartphones would have still remained a distant dream, here and in other developing countries that are still incapable of producing
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indegenously
in an indigenous manner
indigenously
. From branded clothes, exotic vegetables to the 50 varieties of detergent in supermarket aisles, so many of the products used by us are imported.
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, expansion in trade has
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led to substantial growth in scientific co-operation, tourism and
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, better cross-cultural understanding and tolerance.
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,
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is not entirely a blessing.
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multinational companies, which have the advantage of economies of scale, allow consumers to avail better rates, small local industries, unable to
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compete for something; engage in a contest; measure oneself against others
compete
with these prices, suffer losses and have to inadvertently shut shop. Jobs are lost and unemployment increases. Big companies that set up plants in poorer countries might create some employment opportunities, but they do so only to reap advantage of cheap labour,
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widening the income disparity between rich and poor nations. In conclusion,
globalisation
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is overall a positive development
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trade and consumers worldwide, though it has certain unpleasant effects on local economies that need to be
adressed
(of mail) marked with a destination
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