A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job

#friend #job #country #company #sort #work

Hello Arsh, I hope you're doing great. I'm writing

this

letter to inform you that I find a job opportunity in a local firm

that is

appropriate as per your schedule. To commence with, it is a project coordinator job in one of the multinational companies in Canada and you've to coordinate with other team members to complete various projects related to construction projects. Apart from that, I believe

this

is the best opportunity as you completed a project management course recently and you know everything about how to finish various tasks within a time frame.

Moreover

, you just have to visit the nearest office of ABC Industries

along with

your resume. If you need any

further

assistance, a telephone call would be appreciated. I look forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Love

Submitted by tajinder.panag on Wed Jan 24 2024

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Task Achievement

Work on developing the content of each paragraph with more supporting details. Include specifics about job duties or how the friend's skills match the job requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and develops it fully. Supporting ideas should directly relate to the main topic of the paragraph.

Coherence & Cohesion

Use a range of linking words and phrases to show the relationships between ideas and to lead the reader through the content more smoothly.

Task Achievement

Whenever providing information on how to apply for a job, include step-by-step details for clarity, such as contacts, deadlines, or necessary documents.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

134 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

reputation
industry
duties and responsibilities
typical day
skills and experiences
job requirements
company culture
personality
work ethic
application process
job listing
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