In many places, new homes are needed, but the only place available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What it your opinion about this?

Now a days population is increasing day by day and the need of shelter is directly proportional to us.
if
Suggestion
If
there is no building space is available
abvoisly
unmistakably ('plain' is often used informally for 'plainly')
obviously
we would prefer to
bulid
make by combining materials and parts
build
the homes at
countryside but
Accept comma addition
countryside, but
we all know that
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
is the most important aspect
for
Suggestion
of
food and for animals. One of the solution we are having to resolve
this
issue is to build apartments so that we are able to save the
countryside
land and protect it
else
to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
as
we
jave
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
to plant trees and saplings
infront
Suggestion
in front
of the houses we have
build
Suggestion
built
in the
countryside
. The government has to take action on the
population which
Accept comma addition
population, which
is increasing year by
year so
Accept comma addition
year, so
that there will be a bit change and chances to protect the
countryside
and we can
also
avoid building or planning for new homes.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Environmental conservation
  • Natural habitats
  • Biodiversity
  • Ecosystems
  • Disruption
  • Sustainable development
  • Housing density
  • High-rise buildings
  • Urban expansion
  • Renovation
  • Infrastructure costs
  • Local rural economies
  • Quality of life
  • Community cohesion
  • Noise pollution
  • Green space
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