Some people say that in all level of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough to learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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present era

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the present era

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education is confined to books only.From, primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not to practical skills.

Childrens

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Children

are forced to bounded to the bookish knowledge only and don't have

basic understanding

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a basic understanding

of the particular concept. I totally agree with

this

above point.

Now a days

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Nowadays

kids are used as learning machine they do only learning without having

curiousity

a state in which you want to learn more about something

curiosity

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for them learning is

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studied

. Furthermost, parents

also

forced the pupils to get good academic results

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Our whole society is responsible for

this

because no one raises his voice against

such

kind of issues.

schools

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Schools

make an academic a burden in which class is overloaded with high peak pressure without the proper understanding. From the above discussion

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I concluded

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pointing out something

that

they

the

govt

something acquired without compensation

gift

should

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Should

take extreme steps in

this

regard so that the one can get the quality of education not in terms of quantity.

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is very well known saying in

this

regard One pen, One teacher, One child,

can

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Can

change the whole world.

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want that change to be

happened

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happening

and welcomed by everyone in the society.

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Some people say that in all level of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough to learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Compared to our parent’s generation, life has become much more stressful. As a result, stress-related illnesses are on the increase around the world. Why is stress such a problem in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems caused by stress?

Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, wave and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The urban transport system receives more funds compared to the rural transport system. Why do you think it is so? How can it be solved?

The best way for the government to solve traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. Do you agree or disagre?