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Conducting sports events such as Olympics or World cup encourage people to live healthy. While some people indicate that there are various other methods to remain healthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is believed by many people that organizing
world
 level events
such
 as
World
 cup, Olympics encourage people to stay fit and healthy, while others believe that there are many other ways to stay physically fit.
This
 essay will discuss both sides of arguments and explain my support for the former view.   There are many ways to remain healthy like practicing
yoga
 and doing physical exercises every day.
Yoga
 can be performed at any open places and can be learned easily, which helps people to stay physically as well as mentally healthy. According to a recent survey by WHO, practicing
yoga
 helped 30% of the heart patients to cure their diseases.
Additionally
, gym facilities are available at very cheap rate, which motivate people to do the physical exercise and help to maintain their fitness. Overall, availability of
yoga
 a
ng
located at or attached to
on
an
gym facilities can help people to m
aintan
keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintain
their health and fitness.  
Conversely
, hosting
world
 competitions will persuade people to remain physically fit. During
world
 events many renowned players participate in various sports and visit the hosting country, which m
ake people to follow
Suggestion
make people follow
their role models and,
as a result
, n
ew generation
Suggestion
a new generation
the new generation
will get motivated and start to participate in different sports.
For example
, U
nited States
Suggestion
the United States
h
as organized
Suggestion
have organized
Olympics four times and in the
last
 Olympic United s
tates
the federal department in the United States that sets and maintains foreign policies
States
has performed extremely well.
Moreover
, n
umber
Suggestion
the number
a number
of people from all over the
world
 visit the hosting country and provide a chance t
o
Suggestion
for
local people, to know about different cultures.   In summary, there are some strong arguments to perform
yoga
 and doing physical exercise to remain fit,
b
Accept space
,
ut it is more important to host the
world
 level sports events, which can attract young people at mass level and encourage them to participate in various sports and stay physically fit.

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