Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment;only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agreeor disagree.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the
environment
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nly governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you a
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disagree. It is thought that a person has nothing to offer when it comes to the betterment of our surrounding,
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hat it is only the authority and, big industries that has the sole ability of making a change.I strongly disagree with
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essay Some people are of the opinion that it is only the authority and, big companies that can put in a workable difference in sustaining a clean and safe
environment
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if there are policies made by the authority that can aid in the betterment of the
environment
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.An example of
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policy was a policy that was adopted some few years ago known as w
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the war
against indiscipline in N
igeria which
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Nigeria, which
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to
a cleaner
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because whoever did not adhere to it was punished under the law.
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ig industries can reduce environmental pollution to the b
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completely unclothed
barest
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the outskirts of town.
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eliminates the exposure of inhabitants in r
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residential areas
a residential area
to pollutant thereby avoiding the resultant effect which can cause serious health risk. In my opinion,
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think Individuals h
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are having
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an enormous part
enormous parted
to take towards a sustainable
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ittering the surrounding which is an indiscriminate act should be discouraged,
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ndividuals should ensure that dirts and un-used items are disposed properly in the waste bin.
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efuse should be incinerated appropriately to avoid polluting residents.
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here should be proper drainage to ensure that water flows freely during the rainy season to avoid the occurrence of flood or erosion.
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, the cause of f
lood
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the flood
that has been occurring in Lagos,
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city in Nigeria has been traced by an environmentalist to d
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dispose
of refuse in drainages.So, an i
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individual
input should not be underestimated in the refinement of the
environment
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. In conclusion,
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hough it is believed that only the government and big companies has the sole ability to impact environmental sustainability,
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t is undoubtedly clear that the input of an individual towards achieving a clean
environment
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cannot be ignored.

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