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Many educators believe that international exchange trips are beneficial for students. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give you opinion and include any relevent example

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There is a common belief that international
exchange
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 trips would bring more benefits to all
particiy
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. Nowadays, it has become a
trend especially
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trend, especially
 among pupils. They prefer going to foreign countries regarding their study
.
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.
 According to my perspective,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 agree with
this
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 idea. There are numerous
reason
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reasons
 behind it which will be explained upcoming paragraphs. To embark with, there are many benefits of
exchay tour
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the exchay tour
an exchay tour
 to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 nation. The
first
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 and foremost is that it provides a chance to exploring new culture and learn about the different traditions as well as lifestyle of people in
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 country.
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, if pupils go to another nation, it helps to make them more independent and assist them to understand their responsibilities.
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, international
exchange
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 trips are
also
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 beneficial for tutors to upgrade their teaching skills and helps surviving by providing all facilities. Moving
further
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 to
next
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 point, overseas students tend to obtain more opportunities from the trip to find good jobs, after finishing their programme.
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, foreign
exchange
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 programs provide a chance to meet with new people and make new friends as well as enrich their personal development are
also
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 effective to challenge students to develop a global perspective.
For example
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, NASA Internship is one of the popular as many students gain benefits from the program. In conclusion, according to my perspective foreign
exchange
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 program is helpful
fot
appropriate to; intended for
for
 pupils to achieve their goals and learn many things like history,
diffy
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 cultures
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adapt
choose and follow; as of theories, ideas, policies, strategies or plans
adopt
 new language.
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