In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night uncles they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?
Government authorities in US are often concerned about the safety of their teenagers and
that is
why government imposes laws to ensure safety of teenagers. In my opinion, I strongly believe imposing curfew
on teenagers to travel with an adult
during late hours is the an essential an entirely necessary practice and I will discuss my point of view in the subsequent paragraphs.
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On the contrary
, I believe imposing a curfew
in US on teenagers is mandatory to make sure teenagers are safe and protected from any kind of harm and criminal activity. Teenagers are vulnerable targets and are easily kidnapped at late hours. Teenagers do not have a very good understanding to safeguard themselves; therefore
, it is easier to trap teenagers for kidnapping purposes. At times when teenagers are travelling alone at night
, kidnappers easily victimize teenagers. Additionally
, there is always high speed traffic in US on roads during late hours, in such
circumstances, teenagers may have to face road accidents because teenagers are unable to analyze
how to safely cross the road due to lack of experience and tender age. Overall, the idea to impose a consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
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