Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Making children do their best and motivating children to outperform others are considered to be two advantages of encouraging a

sense

of

competition

in children. Persuading children to compete with each other could result in forcing them to try more because they attempt to win math which needs a special effort.

For instance

, when children

endeavor

a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)

endeavour

to get a high mark in school, they must study hard. After getting some high score, they try to outperform others in the

second

step. It means not only is getting high marks important for

them but

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them, but

also

being the

first

person in the group is significant.

As a result

, when children grow up, they utilize their

ability

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abilities

in real life which learned from the

competition

in childhood.

In contrast

amplification of

competition

sense

in children could pose problems like putting a

lot

of pressure on them as well as making them selfish and fraudulent. When the only thing is about winning, they become selfish and cheater because they do not help others a

lot

of it is about studies

also

they try to find another alternative way just to win like cheating. As a child work hard in studying and learning to receive the excellent mark, they put a

lot

of pressure on themselves. Recent research shows some of the students of a school study at home for 6 hours a day to achieve success in getting high marks. Learning from each other and

team

working skills are argued to be two results of strengthening the

sense

of co-operating in children. It is obvious that children learn from one another via cooperating.

For example

, when I was an elementary school child, I learned basketball from my classmate and we learned a

lot

of basketball skill from each other,

finally

, we arranged a

team

and won

first

place in the provincial tournament.

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Another

benefit of co-operating is learning

team

working which is very important these days. Today the ability of

team

working is necessary to find a good job. In my opinion, both

competition

and co-operating

sense

are important to nurture

children but

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children, but

co-

operating

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operation

is more important than competitive

sense

.