Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Research
in science field
must be conducted dan mo
nitored by the state rather than private industry. I agree to subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
than
Dan
this
statement with extent for some reasons. In this
essay, I will explain with examples and explanation to demonstrate some points.
In my opinion the government
should execute and controlled certain scientific researches especially wh
en it related to national security Accept comma addition
researches, especially
such
as research
for national defense.
(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
For example
: in
Indonesia, the Accept space
:
research
to produce weaponry for army an
d police is conducted by PT Pindad as Suggestion
the army
government
body which has duty to
make Suggestion
a duty
the duty
research
and development of Indonesian weapon for soldier an
d other national official guard. Suggestion
soldiers
a soldier
the soldier
Therefore
, there is no another in
snot the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
titution especially fr
om private corporation which is allowed to create Accept comma addition
institution, especially
this
equipment. It is because this
field
is very dangerous to be carried without supervising process by the government
.
I do not look the other side too. In my view, I believe that state sh
ould give private institution chance to implement difSuggestion
the state
states
a state
ferent kind of
Suggestion
different kinds
a different kind
research
. I think it is important because it can improve not only in science field
development but
Accept comma addition
development, but
also
in economic
Suggestion
the economic field
field
. For example
: re
search conducted by priAccept space
:
vate corporation in
medSuggestion
private corporations
a private corporation
icine world.
Suggestion
the medicine world
This
kind of study not only can help people from dissease but
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disease, but
disease but
diseases but
also
can create something new in medical world. A
nother benefit is It can improve economic condition because it provides jobSuggestion
the medical world
fo
r scientist and anoSuggestion
jobs
ther si
mnot the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
iliar wo
rker in marked by correspondence or resemblance
similar
this
area.
In conclusion, I am convinced that there is a certain research
which must be held and need government
supervision because it relates crucial things such
as national defense. B
ut, I (military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
also
believe that it is important too to gi
ve private chance to conduct another type of in the direction of
to
to to
research
. It is because this
kind of research
can improve science development and economic condition.Submitted by imammagnific on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite