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Children’s leisurely activities must be educational. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#children’s #activities
Every individual has their own speciality in performing their tasks. The
leisure
activites
any specific behavior
activities
 is not important to be
educational
Suggestion
educated
. I somehow believe that
education involvement
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education, involvement
 will help the growth of children
academically but
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academically, but
 the activities they fond of might vary with
own
Suggestion
ownership
 interests. The talent may in outshine in any aspect, can be in
education
 or in co-curriculum
activites
any specific behavior
activities
. I believe that children who devote their time in
leisure
 activities like playing instruments, involvement in video games, outdoor activities tends to have more concentration power than children sitting on couch like potatoes. The
education
 in the activities will help to boost, but the
leisure
 activities would encourage
individual
Suggestion
individuals
an individual
 to put in best foot front with enthusiasm.
For example
- children can sit for 2-3 hours continuously while playing video games at the same time when they are called to sit for studies, the deviate their minds and lost in other worlds. For the improvement of
this
, the academics should involve the activities which
excites
Suggestion
excite
 the children and come up with new ideas to promote more
education
 waves.
For instance
- The games should include mathematics and calculations which some children find it tough and the
quickly
Suggestion
quickest
quick
quicker
 response. Everyday quiz and reading the books
of
Suggestion
by
on
 subject with
excited
Suggestion
exciting
 experiments and do it yourself stuffs will enhance their mind activity and make them more concentrated with every task. The conclusion is that
leisure
 activities is not
importantly should
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importantly, should
 be
educational but
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educational, but
 by their own area of interest and let it be
leisure
 or
academically
Suggestion
academic
, the main purpose is to improve the
children
Suggestion
child's
children's
 mind concentration.

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