Some people think that cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe that this is the only way to save such traditions in the world today. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays,
tourism
is considered as a boon for a country’s economy. It plays a pivotal role in a country’s economy since it is considered the largest employer and generator of foreign exchange for many countries. It is often argued that cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as Use synonyms
money-making
tourist attractions, whilst others disagree and think that it is the only method to save the act of making money (and accumulating wealth)
moneymaking
such
traditions in the world today. Linking Words
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essay will discuss both points of view and why I agree that Linking Words
tourism
is the way to save the cultural traditions we have today.
It is clear that interactions with the Use synonyms
tourism
industry will have direct and indirect effects on host communities. Demand for Use synonyms
heritage
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tourism
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incentivize
the expansion of Suggestion
incentivized
heritage
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tourism
activities. It is Use synonyms
therefore
agreed that these cultural and Linking Words
heritage
sites might suffer from a loss of local identity due to influences brought in by tourists. Use synonyms
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commercialization
of local culture for Suggestion
the commercialization
tourism
can turn local culture into commodities. Use synonyms
For example
, cultural erosion may occur when religious traditions, local customs and festivals are reduced and reconstructed to conform to meet tourist expectations.
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However
, many disagree and feel that Linking Words
tourism
brings benefits to host communities and is a means of saving the cultural traditions we have. Use synonyms
This
is due to the fact that Linking Words
tourism
can utilize and harness the demand for Use synonyms
heritage
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tourism
for cultural conservation. Through Use synonyms
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-related activities, funds are generated to care for and maintain these cultural sites and practices. Use synonyms
For example
, monuments being made into an attraction not only stimulates pride in one’s history and stimulates respect and understanding of other cultures, but Linking Words
also
generate funds for site maintenance.
In conclusion, in my opinion, Linking Words
tourism
through cultural attractions is an important means for countries to care for and maintain their Use synonyms
heritage
and cultural practices. While there may be disadvantages to monetizing these cultural traditions, as long as we are mindful and keep in mind the importance of achieving a sustainable Use synonyms
heritage
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tourism
, the benefits of cultural attractions are clearly positive.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite