some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Some individuals think that exchanging data related to
research
in science field, business and educational world is good, while others say that certain information is significant that sharing it without care may become dangerous.
This
essay will argue that
although
sharing information will help in learning different things in fields
such
as science and many others, passing data without care might be not reasonable because they need years of hard work to create. On the one side, data exchange will help each others to learn the new things.
This
is to say that in today's technological era, by using the internet, people will easily access
research
findings which help them to continue
further
research
.
In addition
, students can learn about different subjects in advance with the use of the web. A good reference for
this
is that, 75% of the people learn new things from the sites, which gives free access, to use data on the internet reported in a survey in 2017. In my point of view, these will make people less aware and lazy about the things which are very important. On the other side, there are requirement of years of hard work to make some important data.
This
is to say that online courses which take loads of hard work and time to produce by the owner and if those data will share without taking care,
then
the producers would get big amount of loss which leads them down in their career,
For example
, according to a
research
organized by MTIN university, India, 45% of the people use pirated softwares in their computers.
In contrast
, I believe that these types of data would be fruitful to make people aware and cautious if share them with charges. In conclusion,
although
exchanging the information may give us lots of chances to learn, I think that it makes people less aware and lazy because of easy access and sometimes, there might be a huge loss.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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