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Some people believe that adults get motivated to exercise or play sports because of the major sports events on Tv such as Olympic games and football world cup. Others say that there are many ways apart from Tv to encourage them to exercise. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is believed by some that some adults are motivated to
exercise
 and play sports because of major
sport
Suggestion
sporting
 events, others believe that there are several other ways adults can be motivated to
exercise
. In my
opinion I
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opinion, I
 feel there are other ways adults can get motivated to
exercise
.
Although
 some people believe that adults get their
motivation
 to
exercise
 and play sports from major sports events on TV as they get motivated by their teams quest for success, and
also
 get to see their role models playing on Tv.
However i
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However, I
However I
 do not think
this
 is totally effective as there might be limits as to what sports and exercises can be done. Others are of the opinion that there are other ways to motivate adults to
exercise
 which I totally agree with, these alternatives
includes but
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includes, but
 not limited to adults registering as members in gyms and fitness clubs where people are usually paired in groups of
this
 or threes, these members are responsible for one another as they serves as checks ensuring they all meet their fitness goals and
also
 ensure they eat healthily which
can not
can not
cannot
 be gotten on TV.
In addition
 to
this
, some grownups on the one hand get positively motivated by other people's weight, size or physique and as
such
 can be motivated to attain
such
 fitness level, while some
on the other hand
 get motivated by seeing themselves in the mirror and are determined to make a change for the better. To conclude, even though adults
gets
Suggestion
get
 their
motivation
 to
exercise
 either from watching sports programmes or other sources, I am of the opinion that the best form of
motivation
 is self
motivation
 which should be the driving force for all mankind.

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