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nowadays people get information through news and papers but meanwhile are certain about the truth of these news. Should we believe the journalists? What qualities should a good journalist or correspondent have?

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Awareness about the recent events occurring all around the
world
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 reaches each and every house through
media
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the media
 like news channels, newspapers and radio. People receive the
information
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 about current affairs from these
medias but
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media, but
media but
mediums but
medals but
 are
skeptical
denying or questioning the tenets of especially a religion
sceptical
 about its reliability.
This
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 essay establishes the fact about
worthiness
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the worthiness
 of the journalists and the qualities required to be a good correspondent. News related to any field is captured by journalists with their talent and hard work. People having doubts about the credence of the news can be assured by providing empirical evidence of the news by journalists. Citizens of a country have to believe the
newsperson
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 as they provide proof for certain news by indulging themselves into a particular situation risking their lives.
Firstly
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, the journalists
gather
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gathers
 all the
information
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 from their surroundings on various fields and present it to the public by different ways.
However
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, there are some news which provide false data alluring people to
believe but, it
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believe, but it
 is done majorly by media owners and not by the journalists. Correspondents are the only people who
makes
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make
 the whole
world
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 aware about various events occurring in different fields by retrieving
information
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 in any situation. It requires a brave heart to perform task activities which include danger to one's life. A good journalist should have an intelligent mind to disclose the truth of the news. Newsman should be ready to face any kind of difficult situation in order to get substantial data.
For example
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, recently in India,
kerala
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Kerala
 state has faced hazardous natural calamity of
floods
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the floods
 so, many journalists went
their
in or at that place
there
 to help people and made it alive
to
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in
 the whole
world
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 about the problem. To put it in a nutshell, journalists act as a messenger who delivers the news from various sources to each and every house all over the
world
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.
While
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
Well
, there are some exceptions about the reliability of the
news but
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news, but
 journalists provide empirical evidence for worthiness of the
information
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.

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