Nowadays the ways people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Now a day
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people interact with each other has changed and
this
whole credit goes to the technology. Technology
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definitely affected the types of relationship people make. There are different reasons of changing relationships.
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where advancement makes
people
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peoples'
life comfortable on the other side, it hampers their relations as well. According to me it is totally
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a negative
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one's life. In modern technology specially youngsters are very much active on social sites
such
as what's app
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facebook
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Facebook
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instagram
e.t.c. They make their friends blindly without knowing personally each other and start datings. One day come, when they commit
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a huge
blunder in their life
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Then
no other option will be left for them except suicide and the
cases
events that provide the generative force that is the origin of something
causes
of
such
things are on higher peaks.
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an occurrence of something
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also
responsible for their
extra marital
characterized by adultery
extramarital
affairs and with
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things cases of divorce
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the highest peak
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concluded that Everyone should use the proper advantages of science by making some limits. Don't go before those
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any movable possession (especially articles of clothing)
things
which are not in their limits and don't play with the family
memebers
one of the persons who compose a social group (especially individuals who have joined and participate in a group organization)
members
.
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  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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