Individuals do nothing to improve the environment, only government and large companies can make a difference, To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is a general assumption by some, that individuals have no positive
impact
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on the
environment
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while others believe that large government and parast
atals make
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a great deal of environmental
impact
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. In my opinion, individual efforts go a long way in improving the
environment
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, bringing about environmental sanitation and Serenity.
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idual efforts are limited and do not do justice in comparison with the government and large parast
atals.
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Individuals are capable of positively influencing the
environment
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, by maintaining proper disposal of
waste
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and farming, Its documented, a human produce is 3-5 kg
waste
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per day,
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however, individuals
waste
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together for recycling,
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keeping
waste
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off the streets, road and drainages free of garbage. Recycling requires the input of not just an individual, but machines included,
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their limitations. Individual farming tend to consume animal
waste
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in form o
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nure, and plants release carbon dioxide, an important constituent of atmospheric air which contributes to the stability of the
environment
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. Government and large organizations do
impact
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the
environment
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positively under strict laws and regulations. They are capable of recycling in large quantities.
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However, outside
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law th
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to be a misnomer and companies could contribute to environmental hazards by the release of toxic substances into large water bodies, smoke from heavy duty machine released into air and land oil spillage resulting in water ,air
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d land pollution which can have adverse effect on soil resulting in contaminated food. To a large extent, I agree to the fact that individuals greatly
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the
environment
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positi
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positively, but
good governance and well enforced laws g
overnment and l
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laws, government
arge companies would have a greater
impact
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on the
environment
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.

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