Computers have become so advanced and interactive that students in the future will have no need for a human educator in the classroom. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

In my opinion, it is quite possible that with the advancement in technologies, computers will overtake humans in terms of educating scholars. Things that were impossible by some period of time, are now possible these days like humans are flying by the Aeroplane, we are now able to reach at our neighbour planet. If we relate the process of
achievements
Suggestion
achieving
till now with the future, and the way we are working on the development of artificial intelligence, it implies that we will replace humans with artificial
intelligenct
having the capacity for thought and reason especially to a high degree
intelligent
intelligence
systems.
Firstly
, If we talk about the situation in centuries ago, we used to face lots of difficulties around us like travelling from one place to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
, it would take a lot of time, but today we have vehicles like cars and aeroplanes with which we can reach anywhere with
less amount
Suggestion
the least amount
least amount
of time.
In addition
to that,
today
Suggestion
today's
todays
automated cars have been built and they are used as a public transport. So, the same thing applies to
computers which
Accept comma addition
computers, which
could take
jobs
Suggestion
the jobs
of humans as an educator to teach children.
Secondly
, today, the development is already in a
pace
a point located with respect to surface features of some region
place
that most of the things which used to be done manually have automated and a computer system itself
solves
Suggestion
solve
a particular problem like finding the best route to reach at some place by the google map. Some other examples are an automated software
developments
Suggestion
development
for a client, self driving cars, and an automated temperature controller in an Air Condition. These are the things which give an
assurity
the power or right to give orders or make decisions
authority
that in the nearby future most of the things will be possible including an automated educator. In conclusion.
Although
it has not done yet,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
still have
this intuitions
Suggestion
these intuitions
this intuition
that an artificial intelligent system is going to be developed in
such
a way that it could help in educating children in a fun way and jobs as a teacher will decline.

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