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In the modern stress full and speed world, forget about customs and traditions, even though, Interesting traditional events still celebrate with our people, which are colour full, joy full and meaning full and

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generate the happy among them.

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Vijayathasami

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is the one of the important event for the Hindu people, which is held on October end. There are several public holidays, which is celebrated by our country, but on

Vijayathasami

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, there is not government holiday, there for schools, banks, and other government and non government sector

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open on that day. In past years only Hindu people involved

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event but, nowadays, other religion’s people

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participate at that period

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additionally

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they have a trend to involve every year and making that period like their own festival because,

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is celebrated for their occupation not that, work place and tools

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. People have the opportunity to relax, make

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objective case of they

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as happy, spend

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to with their family and friends, leave their troubles, stress and worries behind and have fun, apart from

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, people able to meet others, make a strong bond between their relationship. Some organizations are celebrating

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function like very big,

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few of cultural events may be arranged

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that moment, which will lead to not only entertain, but

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protect our heredity and tradition without destruction and transfer to the younger generation. It strikes me that, current people don’t have

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to talk with their family members. Always they are running to active something, but their target will change continuously.

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Vijayathasami

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help people to slow down their life pace and enjoy the present moment that are priceless and beautiful.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

275 words

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