describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt, explain your choice, using specific reasons and example.

In the modern stress full and speed world, forget about customs and traditions, even though, Interesting traditional events still celebrate with our people, which are colour full, joy full and meaning full and
also
generate the happy among them.
Vijayathasami
is the one of the important event for the Hindu people, which is held on October end. There are several public holidays, which is celebrated by our country, but on
Vijayathasami
, there is not government holiday, there for schools, banks, and other government and non government sector
also
open on that day. In past years only Hindu people involved
this
event but, nowadays, other religion’s people
also
participate at that period
time
,
additionally
they have a trend to involve every year and making that period like their own festival because,
Vijayathasami
is celebrated for their occupation not that, work place and tools
also
. People have the opportunity to relax, make
time
objective case of they
them
as happy, spend
time
to with their family and friends, leave their troubles, stress and worries behind and have fun, apart from
this
, people able to meet others, make a strong bond between their relationship. Some organizations are celebrating
this
function like very big,
although
few of cultural events may be arranged
on
Suggestion
at
that moment, which will lead to not only entertain, but
also
protect our heredity and tradition without destruction and transfer to the younger generation. It strikes me that, current people don’t have
time
to talk with their family members. Always they are running to active something, but their target will change continuously.
Vijayathasami
help people to slow down their life pace and enjoy the present moment that are priceless and beautiful.
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