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some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

#people #music #cultures #ages
Music
 is known as a universal language because of
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 quality of bringing people together irrespective of their age and culture. In my view, I agree that
music
 has
this
 magical power that touches
harts
a form of whist in which players avoid winning tricks containing hearts or the queen of spades
hearts
 of
evey
(used of count nouns) each and all of the members of a group considered singly and without exception
every
 person which eventually leads brings them together.
To begin
 with,
although
 the meaning of a particular
song
 is unknown, we
tends
Suggestion
tend
 to enjoy that
song
.
For instance
, a
song
 written in
different language
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different languages
a different language
 can become one of our
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
song
 without
knowning
evidencing the possession of inside information
knowing
 the exact meaning of it.
This
 specific nature of
music
 helps us to interact with similar minded people. Evidently, culture
become
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becomes
 irrelevant when we consider about
music
.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
, there are
variety
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a variety
 of musical instruments and styles all over the world. Yet, we
tends
Suggestion
tend
 to close our ice and
enjory
derive or receive pleasure from; get enjoyment from; take pleasure in
enjoy
angry
 when we hear most of them.
This
 is Because, it is the melody and
rithem
the basic rhythmic unit in a piece of music
rhythm
 we like to hear in a particular
song
 or even a play rather than the meaning of it.
Moreover
, some operas and
ocestras
a musical organization consisting of a group of instrumentalists including string players
orchestras
orchestra
does not even contains
Suggestion
do not even contain
 a single word.
However
, people from around the world prefer  listening to those shows for hours.  Another factor
involve
Suggestion
involves
is involved
 in
music
 is that it
attract
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attracts
 different categories of ages.
Primary exmple
Suggestion
The primary example
Primary example
A primary example
Primary examples
 of
this
 is some musical compositions survive through generations
such
 as
song
 "Everything I Do" by Bryan Adams. Which was released in my fathers times still it is one of the
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
 entertainment of mine as well as my father's.
Therefore
,
age
Suggestion
the age
 of a certain person does not quite matter regarding the
music
 which
make
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makes
 it
enjoyble
affording satisfaction or pleasure
enjoyable
 for any person.  To recapitulate, when it comes to
music
 age and culture do not provide any
siginificant
important in effect or meaning
significant
 difference because
people mainly
Accept comma addition
people, mainly
 listen to the
rithem
the basic rhythmic unit in a piece of music
rhythm
 and melody of a
song
 or a play
dispite
regardless of, in defiance of
despite
 the language and the meaning of it.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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