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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the numbers of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.

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In
this
 contemporary epoch, the population is burgeoning exponentially. The youngster proportion of the populace is comparatively larger than the
older
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
. In my perspective, the drawbacks of
this
 status quo seem to be exiguous as compared to its benefits.
This
 essay intends to elucidate the pros,
such
 as better employment and the cons like less efficiency of workers with supporting examples.
To begin
 with, there are quite a few worthwhile advantages of having a large
number
 of young people. Primarily, it is helpful in the betterment of the nation as there will be more people to join forces and parliament. The young people can make changes according to their new mindset. Improvement in the communication medium, as an example.
Moreover
,
natives
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the natives
 can trust
such
 a
person
 because they are
of
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about
 his age. Another major benefit is that there are not any vacant jobs, due to the enormous
number
 of job applicants. To be precise, in
such
 countries the jobs have many native candidates for interview and they choose the most appropriate
person
 for the job. To quote an instance, according to the survey performed in 2018, there were 100 thousand applications registered for 1000 vacant government jobs.
Moreover
, choosing inhabitants
for
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to
 work is much cheaper and convenient than appointing a foreigner. While there are many pros of having the mammoth
number
 of young adults, there are some cons too. In the
first
 place,
youngsters
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the youngsters
 are pioneers and they don't pose adequate knowledge regarding the field like old aged people.
For example
, if a
person
 in his thirties can do some work in 2 hours,
then
 it might take only an hour
for
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from
 another
person
 who is 10 years older than him. In conclusion,
although
 there are some disadvantages of having more
number
 of youngsters like lack of experience, yet its advantages
such
 as the betterment of the nation and improvement in job conditions outweigh its drawbacks.

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