Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinion in this?

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The past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in availability of fast

food

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. Some laud for its convenience and relatively low cost,

however

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, in

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essay I will argue that

this

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kind of

food

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deterimental

(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury

detrimental

both to

induviduals

a human being

individuals

who consume it and society in larger scale. There are two primary idea which I will explain

further

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of all, there is

undeniable fact

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the undeniable fact

an undeniable fact

that excess consuming of fast

food

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could lead to serious health problem.

Food

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such

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as chicken wings, french fires and hamburgers which incredibly high in fat and salt may be responsible for ailments as high blood pressure, obesity and disease.

Moreover

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although

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certain

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certainly

agree that fast

food

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is both affordable and delicious, the cost treating

those

denotes a person or thing

this

kind of illness will much more significant than the price of

food

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itself.

In other words

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, while fast

food

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give

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gives

convenience for consumer in

short term

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the short term

, negative effect unavoidable for

long term

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the long term

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and more importantly, fast

food

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restaurant

deliberately attempt

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deliberately attempts

to attract

childern

a young person of either sex

children

in order to shape their future eating habits. On particularly good

exmaple

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

example

this

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is the character Ronald McDonald

always wearing

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always wears

is always wearing

bright colour and giving smiles

everytime

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every time

. Having grown up with fast

food

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everyday

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every day

, people

are

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more likely to get used to eating hotdog or hamburger for their daily meal.

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It's

also

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interesting to note that fast

food

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restaurant provides playground and frequently hold birthday party in order to attract more children and

also

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their parents. By way of conclusion, I believe that fast

food

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restaurant will become more popular in the future as the pace of life increase. Given the public health problem that may associated with

this

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trend, I believe that public education should give campaign to society about the danger in excess

counsume

a person who uses goods or services

consumer

of fast

food

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so people could get

awarness

having knowledge of

awareness

to preserve their healthy eating habits.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Obesity epidemic
Processed foods
Nutritional value
Chronic diseases
Cultural homogenization
Lifestyle changes
Economic impact
Job creation
Environmental degradation
Sustainability
Dietary habits
Consumerism
Mass production
Public health
Health-conscious

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Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinion in this?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that managers alone should make decisions in the company, while others thing that employee should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

nowdays, many people choose to be self- employes, rather than to work for a company or organaisation. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantages of being self employed?

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.