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History is not useful. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that
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 is not playing a great role in our everyday life and
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 subject is not useful.
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 essay disagrees with
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 statement because
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 is very valuable for several reasons: for gaining knowledge and for avoiding mistakes in the future. It is widely believed that by learning past, people can get useful information. Most of the important findings
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 as algebra, geometry, physics and chemistry were discovered thousand years ago. Because these openings were decades ago, it can be considered as
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historical
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, most of the schools
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teach
are teaching
 their students
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 lesson just for knowledge. It is certainly true that humanity made a lot of mistakes in the previous times. If civilization will take these facts into the consideration,
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 errors like holocaust, different wars will have a great chance to not appear in the future. Because people will be able to understand to which disadvantages it could lead our world. Due
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 humanity will make an effort to avoid
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 doings for our better future. A recent study found that more than 60% learning by analysing their or other
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peoples'
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 mistakes, which will help them to avoid negative consequences again. In conclusion,
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 has a lot of advantages
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 our society,
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 as gaining useful information and avoiding negative effects in the coming days by learning fails in the past.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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