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SCIENCE ADVANCED SO MUCH THAT IT CAN NOW MAKE IT POSSIBLE FOR PEOPLE TO LIVE 100 YEARS OR EVEN 200 YEARS. SOME PEOPLE THINK ITS A GOOD THING, WHILE OTHERS THINK IT IS BAD… DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND WRITE YOUR OPINION.

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In the recent times,
science
 and
technology
 has developed to
such
 an extent that it is now possible to even increase a people's life span by using advanced medical facilities. It is thought by some people that
this
 development is good for mankind,
however
 others believe that
this
 has a negative impact on humans. In my opinion,
science
 has made people's life easier as compared with older days, so it is certainly a good development, but few anti-social elements may use it to harm society so in
such
 cases
technology
 has proven dangerous too.
Technology
 development is considered good due to a plethora of reasons.
Firstly
, automation in many fields has made people's life simpler as now it has become quite easy to do work with less effort as well as time. To state an example, with the use of washing machines, laundry has become a simple and less time taking task.
Secondly
, education mediums are improved drastically as now one can learn things and attend classes while sitting at home using modern
technology
.
Finally
, the use of
science
 cannot be ignored in the medical field, many diseases can be diagnosed and treated in less time by using advanced medical equipment.
On the other hand
,
this
 can be harmful and disastrous if not used wisely. After introduction of
technology
 people have become dependent on
technology
 as now as most of the people do not like to do any manual or physical work;
hence
 their health is impacted.
In addition
 to, automation has resulted in layout in many of the organization, so it has reduced employment options. To conclude,
science
 and
technology
 can benefit society in many ways, but it must be used wisely and only for betterment of society. If used in the best way, any individual and nation can grow rapidly, but if ignorance is shown
then
 it can result in dire consequences.

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