In many countries fast food becomes part of life. It affects people’s lifestyle and diet as well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
In some countries convenience
food
becomes an integral part of human lives
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life
This
not only affects people’s lifestyle but
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lifestyle, but
also
food
choice. I completely agree with this
statement because excessive consumption of junk food
brought several health
issues and it has changed people’s food
preference.
The main reason why I think readymade
made for purchase and immediate use
ready-made
food
changed people’s lifestyle is that the over consumption of it creates numerous health
problems. This
is because majority
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the majority
readymade
foods are high in sugar, calories and unhealthy made for purchase and immediate use
ready-made
fat which
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fat, which
increase
the cholesterol level of the frequent consumers. Suggestion
increases
As a result
, people who often eat high calorie food
are likely vulnerable to health
issues namely
obesity, diabetes and heart attack. To illustrate Accept comma addition
issues, namely
this
, the Health
Advisory Board of Singapore revealed that four out of ten juveniles who suffer from overweight are frequent consumers of readymade
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ready made
food
.
Furthermore
, this
phenomenon changed people’s food
choice too. Previously, people prefer to eat nutritional food
which is rich in vitamins and home cooked. However
, now many people indulged to buy food
from chain of fast food
restaurants as they offer food
in attractive packaging and at exceptional taste. These foods are often come with promotional offers due to the increased competition between major fast food
giants. For instance
, my cousin who frequently dines at local pizzeria claims that the price of the pizza is cheaper than conventional food
, which is being sold in the nearby food
court.
In conclusion, a greater number of individuals are attracted towards the unhealthy high calorie food
due to the taste and marketing strategies. This
puts pressure on wellbeing
of the general public as it causes many severe Suggestion
the wellbeing
well being
health
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
