You recently purchased an item from a local store, but you are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the manager of the store. In your letter: Describe the item you bought and why you need it. Explain why you are not happy with it. Say what you would like the manager to do.

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Dear Sir, I hope
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letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. I am writing
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letter to address a pressing concern that has arisen regarding the television purchase that I made a week ago from your downtown branch. My purchase receipt number and membership number are XOI209011 and 788001 respectively.
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, I bought
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device for my son to keep in his room as he needs a big television screen to watch movies and play games.
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, the TV works properly, but after some days it is not working as effectively from the day we purchased it. My son is having a really hard time as he was not able to watch his favourite shows.
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above-mentioned
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reasons, I would like to replace
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television with a new one.I have been your loyal customer for the
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five years, and I know you will solve
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issue as soon as possible Thank you for your consideration. I hope to hear from you soon regarding
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matter. Yours faithfully, Avi Bhadiyadra
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coherence cohesion
Make sure the letter's structure flows smoothly by using transitional phrases to connect your points more clearly.
task achievement
Expand on the specifics of how the item failed to meet your expectations to strengthen your argument.
task achievement
You've addressed the task well by describing the purchased item, stating the issue, and suggesting a solution.
coherence cohesion
The polite tone and formal salutations are apt for the context.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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