Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.
Dear Mamun,
My teacher "
Mr.
Iqubal Hossain" suggested Change the punctuation
Mr
me
Correct pronoun usage
I
to
write a letter to you because I am looking for a penfriend. I would like to know if you are Fix the infinitive
apply
also
interested to write me.
I am 35 years old and living in Bashundhara Residential Area, Dhaka, Bangladesh
. Currently
I am working as a Senior Lead Engineer in Grameenphone which is Add a comma
,Currently
number
1 telecommunication operator in Correct article usage
the number
Bangladesh
. I have completed my bachelor degree in Computer Science and Engineering from Daffodil International University (DIU) and masters in Information Systems Security from Bangladesh
University of Professionals (BUP).
During the
free time, I like to do outdoor sports like Cricket and football. I love to do batting than bowling in cricket and I prefer to play in central defence in football. I do running or cycling for five days each week. I am involved in different cycling and running Change the word
my
group
and we participate in different events. I Fix the agreement mistake
groups
also
like to spend time with my family. In every quarter I along with my friends or family, we go to visit different
Add an article
a different
area
like Coxbazar, Change the noun form
areas
Syhlet
and Correct your spelling
Sylhet
other historical area
in Change the wording
another historical area
other historical areas
Bangladesh
.
Well, I hope you will like to write me
. I really look forward to you to know about yourself, your hobbies and what you like to do Change preposition
to me
on
your free time.
All the best,
Badsha Fasyal KabirChange preposition
in
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite