The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population, This is causing problems not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialised and developing nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.

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in
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into
the 20th century the world has seen what is known as “population outburst”. The globe is experiencing a major inflation in the population;
thus
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creating problems
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in
the developed and developing nations, but poorer countries are in a misery. The problems are due to poverty along, with
lack
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of
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
facitlites
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
.
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of all, poverty is the major setback
for
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to
the nations globally. The nitty-gritty details reveal that for a prosperous country; embarks on prosperity by lifting the educational standards.
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For example
, the North African states are in really bad condition because of overpopulation with
lack
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of resources and education. The poverty brings
lack
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of education and
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
, adding up having more children in order to be a helping hand for the family is just the old wives tale.
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of all, the
goverment’s
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government’s
will to support its people
is
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are
still a question mark. The facilities that
goverment
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the government
government
provides are just like a perfect storm for the people lacking vision and aim; the leaders are incapable of providing the working framework.
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, it is observed that
conditons
the prevailing context that influences the performance or the outcome of a process
conditions
condition
of people in Africa and far away in South America are
much not different
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not much different
.
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, both the continents are unable to
deliever
bring to a destination, make a delivery
deliver
delivery
effective measures for
there
of them or themselves
their
people and
thus
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,
lack
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of
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
still
presists
continue to exist
persists
resulting in
such
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huge
outbbreak
a sudden violent spontaneous occurrence (usually of some undesirable condition)
outbreak
.
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, basic level of measure can help to control the problems. Since, the boom of technology, media could be used to educate the teenagers and other population
that is
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availble
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
. To illustrate, the world has the perfect example of China and Malaysia; with a great policy
meausres
determine the measurements of something or somebody, take measurements of
measures
to
accomdate
be agreeable or acceptable to
accommodate
each individual
accordingly
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,
hence
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promoting peace and equality.
In addition
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,
highilighting
an area of lightness in a picture
highlighting
the role that
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
must play to incorporate measures that are required to help to overcome
such
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basic problems. To conclude,
world
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the world
is
experincing
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experiencing
the problem of
popluation
the people who inhabit a territory or state
population
pollution
populations
due to
lack
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of
govermental
relating to or dealing with the affairs or structure of government or politics or the state
governmental
intrest
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
interests
and
lack
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of education.
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, little measures like
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
programs through media and internet with
improvment
a change for the better; progress in development
improvement
in the
govermental
relating to or dealing with the affairs or structure of government or politics or the state
governmental
aims; somehow will help to control the problem.

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