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Nowadays consumer goods have become the most important part of people's lives. do the advantage of the outweigh the disadvantage?

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Introduction
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usage
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 and electric things. People have become very dependent on these goods which have its own advantages and disadvantages
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in
of
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life
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. In
this
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essay
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, I shall discuss about the pros and cons and illustrate on how the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Body paragraph 1
To begin
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 with,
consumer
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 goods play a very vital
role
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 in
people
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peoples'
life
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 due to their advantages. The main
reason
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 is that they have made individuals
life
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 easier by saving
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lot
Suggestion
lots
 of
time
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. The things which are done without the
use
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 of these things like the
automobile
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 or the electrical takes more
time
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 and the
energy
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 when compared to doing it with the
help
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 of these goods.
For
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example
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, with the
help
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 of the
car
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anyone
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 can
travel
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 long
distance
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with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 a short
span
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 of
time
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 when compared to going by walk. To add on,
recent
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a recent study
study
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 at the
university
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 of California as shown that there was
30%
Suggestion
a 30 % increase
increase
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 in the
efficiency
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 of the
work
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, when the people came from a
car
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 than by walking.
Body paragraph 2
However
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,
usage
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 of these products has its own disadvantages.
Firstly
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, people have become very lazy because they are saving lots of
time
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.
Secondly
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, while using these products there is a very less physical
activity
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. To illustrate, these days in
markets there
Suggestion
the markets, there
the markets there
 are many automatic cars available where
Use synonyms
person
Suggestion
personally
 do not even
use
Use synonyms
 hands to
change
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 the
gear
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. According to
recent
Suggestion
a recent survey
survey
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 done by the Times of India
newspaper
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 nearly 10% people are obese due to the
dependency
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 they have on their cars.
Body paragraph 3
In
conclusion
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, even though there are some disadvantages like humans becoming less active and the
decrease
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 in their
level
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 of the
work
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 out they do, advantages
such
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 as getting more
time
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 to do other activities overrides its problems.
Body paragraph 4
In recent times there is an
increase
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 in the
usage
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 of
automobile
Use synonyms
 and electric things. People have become very dependent on these goods which have its own advantages and disadvantages
onn
Suggestion
in
on
of
own
 human
life
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. In
this
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essay
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, I shall discuss about the pros and cons and illustrate on how the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Body paragraph 5
To begin
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 with,
consumer
Use synonyms
 goods play a very vital
role
Use synonyms
 in
people
Suggestion
peoples'
life
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 due to their advantages. The main
reason
Use synonyms
 is that they have made individuals
life
Use synonyms
 easier by saving
Use synonyms
lot
Suggestion
lots
 of
time
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. The things which are done without the
use
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 of these things like the
automobile
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 or the electrical takes more
time
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 and the
energy
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 when compared to doing it with the
help
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 of these goods.
For
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example
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, with the
help
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 of the
car
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anyone
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 can
travel
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 long
distance
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with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 a short
span
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 of
time
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 when compared to going by walk. To add on,
recent
Suggestion
a recent study
study
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 at the
university
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 of California as shown that there was
30%
Suggestion
a 30 % increase
increase
Use synonyms
 in the
efficiency
Use synonyms
 of the
work
Use synonyms
, when the people came from a
car
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 than by walking.
Body paragraph 6
However
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,
usage
Use synonyms
 of these products has its own disadvantages.
Firstly
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, people have become very lazy because they are saving lots of
time
Use synonyms
.
Secondly
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, while using these products there is a very less physical
activity
Use synonyms
. To illustrate, these days in
markets there
Suggestion
the markets, there
the markets there
 are many automatic cars available where
Use synonyms
person
Suggestion
personally
 do not even
use
Use synonyms
 hands to
change
Use synonyms
 the
gear
Use synonyms
. According to
recent
Suggestion
a recent survey
survey
Use synonyms
 done by the Times of India
newspaper
Use synonyms
 nearly 10% people are obese due to the
dependency
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 they have on their cars.
Body paragraph 7
In
conclusion
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, even though there are some disadvantages like humans becoming less active and the
decrease
Use synonyms
 in their
level
Use synonyms
 of the
work
Use synonyms
 out they do, advantages
such
Linking Words
 as getting more
time
Use synonyms
 to do other activities overrides its problems.In recent times there is an
increase
Use synonyms
 in the
usage
Use synonyms
 of
automobile
Use synonyms
 and electric things. People have become very dependent on these goods which have its own advantages and disadvantages
on
Suggestion
in
of
 human
life
Use synonyms
. In
this
Linking Words
essay
Use synonyms
, I shall discuss about the pros and cons and illustrate on how the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Body paragraph 8
To begin
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 with,
consumer
Use synonyms
 goods play a very vital
role
Use synonyms
 in
peoplee
Suggestion
peoples'
people
peoples
life
Use synonyms
 due to their advantages. The main
reason
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 is that they have made individuals
life
Use synonyms
 easier by saving
Use synonyms
lot
Suggestion
lots
 of
time
Use synonyms
. The things which are done without the
use
Use synonyms
 of these things like the
automobile
Use synonyms
 or the electrical takes more
time
Use synonyms
 and the
energy
Use synonyms
 when compared to doing it with the
help
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 of these goods.
For
Linking Words
example
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, with the
help
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 of the
car
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anyone
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 can
travel
Use synonyms
 long
distance
Use synonyms
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 a short
span
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 of
time
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 when compared to going by walk. To add on,
recent
Suggestion
a recent study
study
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 at the
university
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 of California as shown that there was
30%
Suggestion
a 30 % increase
increase
Use synonyms
 in the
efficiency
Use synonyms
 of the
work
Use synonyms
, when the people came from a
car
Use synonyms
 than by walking.
Body paragraph 9
However
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,
usage
Use synonyms
 of these products has its own disadvantages.
Firstly
Linking Words
, people have become very lazy because they are saving lots of
time
Use synonyms
.
Secondly
Linking Words
, while using these products there is a very less physical
activity
Use synonyms
. To illustrate, these days in
markets there
Suggestion
the markets, there
the markets there
 are many automatic cars available where
Use synonyms
person
Suggestion
personally
 do not even
use
Use synonyms
 hands to
change
Use synonyms
 the
gear
Use synonyms
. According to
recent
Suggestion
a recent survey
survey
Use synonyms
 done by the Times of India
newspaper
Use synonyms
 nearly 10% people are obese due to the
dependency
Use synonyms
 they have on their cars.
Body paragraph 10
In
conclusion
Use synonyms
, even though there are some disadvantages like humans becoming less active and the
decrease
Use synonyms
 in their
level
Use synonyms
 of the
work
Use synonyms
 out they do, advantages
such
Linking Words
 as getting more
time
Use synonyms
 to do other activities overrides its problems.In recent times there is an
increase
Use synonyms
 in the
usage
Use synonyms
 of
automobile
Use synonyms
 and electric things. People have become very dependent on these goods which have its own advantages and disadvantages
on
Suggestion
in
of
 human
life
Use synonyms
. In
this
Linking Words
essay
Use synonyms
, I shall discuss about the pros and cons and illustrate on how the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Body paragraph 11
To begin
Linking Words
 with,
consumer
Use synonyms
 goods play a very vital
role
Use synonyms
 in
people
Suggestion
peoples'
life
Use synonyms
 due to their advantages. The main
reason
Use synonyms
 is that they have made individuals
life
Use synonyms
 easier by saving
lott
Suggestion
lots
lot
 of
time
Use synonyms
. The things which are done without the
use
Use synonyms
 of these things like the
automobile
Use synonyms
 or the electrical takes more
time
Use synonyms
 and the
energy
Use synonyms
 when compared to doing it with the
help
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 of these goods.
For
Linking Words
example
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, with the
help
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 of the
car
Use synonyms
anyone
Use synonyms
 can
travel
Use synonyms
 long
distance
Use synonyms
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 a short
span
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 of
time
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 when compared to going by walk. To add on,
recent
Suggestion
a recent study
study
Use synonyms
 at the
university
Use synonyms
 of California as shown that there was
30%
Suggestion
a 30 % increase
increase
Use synonyms
 in the
efficiency
Use synonyms
 of the
work
Use synonyms
, when the people came from a
car
Use synonyms
 than by walking.
Body paragraph 12
However
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,
usage
Use synonyms
 of these products has its own disadvantages.
Firstly
Linking Words
, people have become very lazy because they are saving lots of
time
Use synonyms
.
Secondly
Linking Words
, while using these products there is a very less physical
activity
Use synonyms
. To illustrate, these days in
markets there
Suggestion
the markets, there
the markets there
 are many automatic cars available where
Use synonyms
person
Suggestion
personally
 do not even
use
Use synonyms
 hands to
change
Use synonyms
 the
gear
Use synonyms
. According to
recent
Suggestion
a recent survey
survey
Use synonyms
 done by the Times of India
newspaper
Use synonyms
 nearly 10% people are obese due to the
dependency
Use synonyms
 they have on their cars.
Body paragraph 13
In
conclusion
Use synonyms
, even though there are some disadvantages like humans becoming less active and the
decrease
Use synonyms
 in their
level
Use synonyms
 of the
work
Use synonyms
 out they do, advantages
such
Linking Words
 as getting more
time
Use synonyms
 to do other activities overrides its problems.In recent times there is an
increase
Use synonyms
 in the
usage
Use synonyms
 of
automobile
Use synonyms
 and electric things. People have become very dependent on these goods which have its own advantages and disadvantages
on
Suggestion
in
of
 human
life
Use synonyms
. In
this
Linking Words
essay
Use synonyms
, I shall discuss about the pros and cons and illustrate on how the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Body paragraph 14
To begin
Linking Words
 with,
consumer
Use synonyms
 goods play a very vital
role
Use synonyms
 in
people
Suggestion
peoples'
life
Use synonyms
 due to their advantages. The main
reason
Use synonyms
 is that they have made individuals
life
Use synonyms
 easier by saving
Use synonyms
lot
Suggestion
lots
 of
time
Use synonyms
. The things which are done without the
use
Use synonyms
 of these things like the
automobile
Use synonyms
 or the electrical takes more
time
Use synonyms
 and the
energy
Use synonyms
 when compared to doing it with the
help
Use synonyms
 of these goods.
For
Linking Words
example
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, with the
help
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 of the
car
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anyone
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 can
travel
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 long
distance
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 with
inn
Suggestion
the inn
 a short
span
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 of
time
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 when compared to going by walk. To add on,
recent
Suggestion
a recent study
study
Use synonyms
 at the
university
Use synonyms
 of California as shown that there was
30%
Suggestion
a 30 % increase
increase
Use synonyms
 in the
efficiency
Use synonyms
 of the
work
Use synonyms
, when the people came from a
car
Use synonyms
 than by walking.
Body paragraph 15
However
Linking Words
,
usage
Use synonyms
 of these products has its own disadvantages.
Firstly
Linking Words
, people have become very lazy because they are saving lots of
time
Use synonyms
.
Secondly
Linking Words
, while using these products there is a very less physical
activity
Use synonyms
. To illustrate, these days in
markets there
Suggestion
the markets, there
the markets there
 are many automatic cars available where
Use synonyms
person
Suggestion
personally
 do not even
use
Use synonyms
 hands to
change
Use synonyms
 the
gear
Use synonyms
. According to
recent
Suggestion
a recent survey
survey
Use synonyms
 done by the Times of India
newspaper
Use synonyms
 nearly 10% people are obese due to the
dependency
Use synonyms
 they have on their cars.
Body paragraph 16
In
conclusion
Use synonyms
, even though there are some disadvantages like humans becoming less active and the
decrease
Use synonyms
 in their
level
Use synonyms
 of the
work
Use synonyms
 out they do, advantages
such
Linking Words
 as getting more
time
Use synonyms
 to do other activities overrides its problems.In recent times there is an
increase
Use synonyms
 in the
usage
Use synonyms
 of
automobile
Use synonyms
 and electric things. People have become very dependent on these goods which have its own advantages and disadvantages
on
Suggestion
in
of
 human
life
Use synonyms
. In
this
Linking Words
essay
Use synonyms
, I shall discuss about the pros and cons and illustrate on how the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Body paragraph 17
To begin
Linking Words
 with,
consumer
Use synonyms
 goods play a very vital
role
Use synonyms
 in
people
Suggestion
peoples'
life
Use synonyms
 due to their advantages. The main
reason
Use synonyms
 is that they have made individuals
life
Use synonyms
 easier by saving
Use synonyms
lot
Suggestion
lots
 of
time
Use synonyms
. The things which are done without the
use
Use synonyms
 of these things like the
automobile
Use synonyms
 or the electrical takes more
time
Use synonyms
 and the
energy
Use synonyms
 when compared to doing it with the
help
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 of these goods.
For
Linking Words
example
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, with the
help
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 of the
car
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anyone
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 can
travel
Use synonyms
 long
distance
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with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 a short
span
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 of
time
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 when compared to going by walk. To add on,
recent studyy
Suggestion
a recent study
recent study
 at the
university
Use synonyms
 of California as shown that there was
30%
Suggestion
a 30 % increase
increase
Use synonyms
 in the
efficiency
Use synonyms
 of the
work
Use synonyms
, when the people came from a
car
Use synonyms
 than by walking.
Body paragraph 18
However
Linking Words
,
usage
Use synonyms
 of these products has its own disadvantages.
Firstly
Linking Words
, people have become very lazy because they are saving lots of
time
Use synonyms
.
Secondly
Linking Words
, while using these products there is a very less physical
activity
Use synonyms
. To illustrate, these days in
markets there
Suggestion
the markets, there
the markets there
 are many automatic cars available where
Use synonyms
person
Suggestion
personally
 do not even
use
Use synonyms
 hands to
change
Use synonyms
 the
gear
Use synonyms
. According to
recent
Suggestion
a recent survey
survey
Use synonyms
 done by the Times of India
newspaper
Use synonyms
 nearly 10% people are obese due to the
dependency
Use synonyms
 they have on their cars.
Body paragraph 19
In
conclusion
Use synonyms
, even though there are some disadvantages like humans becoming less active and the
decrease
Use synonyms
 in their
level
Use synonyms
 of the
work
Use synonyms
 out they do, advantages
such
Linking Words
 as getting more
time
Use synonyms
 to do other activities overrides its problems.In recent times there is an
increase
Use synonyms
 in the
usage
Use synonyms
 of
automobile
Use synonyms
 and electric things. People have become very dependent on these goods which have its own advantages and disadvantages
on
Suggestion
in
of
 human
life
Use synonyms
. In
this
Linking Words
essay
Use synonyms
, I shall discuss about the pros and cons and illustrate on how the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Body paragraph 20
To begin
Linking Words
 with,
consumer
Use synonyms
 goods play a very vital
role
Use synonyms
 in
people
Suggestion
peoples'
life
Use synonyms
 due to their advantages. The main
reason
Use synonyms
 is that they have made individuals
life
Use synonyms
 easier by saving
Use synonyms
lot
Suggestion
lots
 of
time
Use synonyms
. The things which are done without the
use
Use synonyms
 of these things like the
automobile
Use synonyms
 or the electrical takes more
time
Use synonyms
 and the
energy
Use synonyms
 when compared to doing it with the
help
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 of these goods.
For
Linking Words
example
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, with the
help
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 of the
car
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anyone
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 can
travel
Use synonyms
 long
distance
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with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 a short
span
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 of
time
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 when compared to going by walk. To add on,
recent
Suggestion
a recent study
study
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 at the
university
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 of California as shown that there was
30% increasee
Suggestion
a 30 % increase
30 % increase
30 % increases
 in the
efficiency
Use synonyms
 of the
work
Use synonyms
, when the people came from a
car
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 than by walking.
Body paragraph 21
However
Linking Words
,
usage
Use synonyms
 of these products has its own disadvantages.
Firstly
Linking Words
, people have become very lazy because they are saving lots of
time
Use synonyms
.
Secondly
Linking Words
, while using these products there is a very less physical
activity
Use synonyms
. To illustrate, these days in
markets there
Suggestion
the markets, there
the markets there
 are many automatic cars available where
Use synonyms
person
Suggestion
personally
 do not even
use
Use synonyms
 hands to
change
Use synonyms
 the
gear
Use synonyms
. According to
recent
Suggestion
a recent survey
survey
Use synonyms
 done by the Times of India
newspaper
Use synonyms
 nearly 10% people are obese due to the
dependency
Use synonyms
 they have on their cars.
Body paragraph 22
In
conclusion
Use synonyms
, even though there are some disadvantages like humans becoming less active and the
decrease
Use synonyms
 in their
level
Use synonyms
 of the
work
Use synonyms
 out they do, advantages
such
Linking Words
 as getting more
time
Use synonyms
 to do other activities overrides its problems.In recent times there is an
increase
Use synonyms
 in the
usage
Use synonyms
 of
automobile
Use synonyms
 and electric things. People have become very dependent on these goods which have its own advantages and disadvantages
on
Suggestion
in
of
 human
life
Use synonyms
. In
this
Linking Words
essay
Use synonyms
, I shall discuss about the pros and cons and illustrate on how the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Body paragraph 23
To begin
Linking Words
 with,
consumer
Use synonyms
 goods play a very vital
role
Use synonyms
 in
people
Suggestion
peoples'
life
Use synonyms
 due to their advantages. The main
reason
Use synonyms
 is that they have made individuals
life
Use synonyms
 easier by saving
Use synonyms
lot
Suggestion
lots
 of
time
Use synonyms
. The things which are done without the
use
Use synonyms
 of these things like the
automobile
Use synonyms
 or the electrical takes more
time
Use synonyms
 and the
energy
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 when compared to doing it with the
help
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 of these goods.
For
Linking Words
example
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, with the
help
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 of the
car
Use synonyms
anyone
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 can
travel
Use synonyms
 long
distance
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with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 a short
span
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 of
time
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 when compared to going by walk. To add on,
recent
Suggestion
a recent study
study
Use synonyms
 at the
university
Use synonyms
 of California as shown that there was
30%
Suggestion
a 30 % increase
increase
Use synonyms
 in the
efficiency
Use synonyms
 of the
work
Use synonyms
, when the people came from a
car
Use synonyms
 than by walking.
Body paragraph 24
However
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,
usage
Use synonyms
 of these products has its own disadvantages.
Firstly
Linking Words
, people have become very lazy because they are saving lots of
time
Use synonyms
.
Secondly
Linking Words
, while using these products there is a very less physical
activity
Use synonyms
. To illustrate, these days in
markets theree
Suggestion
the markets, there
markets there
the markets there
the markets theree
 are many automatic cars available where
Use synonyms
person
Suggestion
personally
 do not even
use
Use synonyms
 hands to
change
Use synonyms
 the
gear
Use synonyms
. According to
recent
Suggestion
a recent survey
survey
Use synonyms
 done by the Times of India
newspaper
Use synonyms
 nearly 10% people are obese due to the
dependency
Use synonyms
 they have on their cars.
Body paragraph 25
In
conclusion
Use synonyms
, even though there are some disadvantages like humans becoming less active and the
decrease
Use synonyms
 in their
level
Use synonyms
 of the
work
Use synonyms
 out they do, advantages
such
Linking Words
 as getting more
time
Use synonyms
 to do other activities overrides its problems.In recent times there is an
increase
Use synonyms
 in the
usage
Use synonyms
 of
automobile
Use synonyms
 and electric things. People have become very dependent on these goods which have its own advantages and disadvantages
on
Suggestion
in
of
 human
life
Use synonyms
. In
this
Linking Words
essay
Use synonyms
, I shall discuss about the pros and cons and illustrate on how the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Body paragraph 26
To begin
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 with,
consumer
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, I shall discuss about the pros and cons and illustrate on how the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
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, people have become very lazy because they are saving lots of
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person
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a recent survey
survey
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dependency
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Body paragraph 58
In
conclusion
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, even though there are some disadvantages like humans becoming less active and the
decrease
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, I shall discuss about the pros and cons and illustrate on how the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Body paragraph 59
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consumer
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people
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 due to their advantages. The main
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 is that they have made individuals
life
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time
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. The things which are done without the
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usage
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, people have become very lazy because they are saving lots of
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person
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personally
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survey
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Body paragraph 61
In
conclusion
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, even though there are some disadvantages like humans becoming less active and the
decrease
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, I shall discuss about the pros and cons and illustrate on how the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Body paragraph 62
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consumer
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people
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 due to their advantages. The main
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life
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usage
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, people have become very lazy because they are saving lots of
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an instance or single occasion for some event
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activity
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person
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personally
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use
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gear
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. According to
recent
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a recent survey
survey
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newspaper
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 nearly 10% people are obese due to the
dependency
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 they have on their cars.
Body paragraph 64
In
conclusion
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, even though there are some disadvantages like humans becoming less active and the
decrease
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 in their
level
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 of the
work
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 out they do, advantages
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 as getting more
time
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increase
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usage
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automobile
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 and electric things. People have become very dependent on these goods which have its own advantages and disadvantages
on
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in
of
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life
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. In
this
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essay
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, I shall discuss about the pros and cons and illustrate on how the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Body paragraph 65
To begin
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consumer
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role
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 in
people
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peoples'
life
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 due to their advantages. The main
reason
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 is that they have made individuals
life
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 easier by saving
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lot
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 of
time
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. The things which are done without the
use
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 of these things like the
automobile
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work
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, people have become very lazy because they are saving lots of
time
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.
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activity
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. To illustrate, these days in
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person
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personally
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 hands to
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. According to
recent
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a recent survey
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decrease
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an instance or single occasion for some event
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