In order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people believe that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argued that

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students need to pay higher fees while some believed that

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learning should be available to all students at no

cost

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. In my opinion, I believe higher

institution

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should be taken seriously because it has a lot of impact and effect on the country’s

economy

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as a whole. People that believed

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must pay higher school fees

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gave their reasons.

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, they argued that funding of a higher

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is not cheap

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for students to get quality

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there is a need for experienced lecturers which comes at a

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.

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, it helps the

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to plan ahead and make proper planning as to how many students will be offered admission.

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, lecturers will attend to each

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base

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based

on their ability and not generalize their efforts and

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will improve the confidence level of each

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.

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I agree with paying tuition

fees but

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fees, but

it should be affordable.

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view fails to consider the effect of these decisions to the

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as it will lead to so many drop outs and

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resulting to touts on the street

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fail to

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realize

that students will not be motivated to return to

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immediately after their high school and refer to these conditions as their excuses for not furthering their

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.

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, some argued that

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education

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should be free for everyone. They believed that making it available for all at no

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will motivate

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to learn

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learning

which will improve the country‘s

economy

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. Why I disagree with

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view is that the

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of running

an

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a

higher

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cannot be underestimated because a good

university

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requires good learning environments, experienced Lecturers and adequate learning equipment, all these

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come

at a

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.

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, the quality of lectures received will reduced compared to a system where students are required to pay. It will be unfair to make

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free for all

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student

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students

because it will not be profitable for the

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privately

owned

university

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. In conclusion,

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system is very vital to any country’s

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and should be treated as

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.

College

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education

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should come at a

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,

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it must be affordable for all students in order for both

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and students to receive value for their efforts and money.