In order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people believe that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argued that
college
students need to pay higher fees while some believed that
college
learning should be available to all students at no
cost
. In my opinion, I believe higher
institution
should be taken seriously because it has a lot of impact and effect on the country’s
economy
as a whole. People that believed
student
must pay higher school fees
further
gave their reasons.
Firstly
, they argued that funding of a higher
institution
is not cheap
thus
for students to get quality
education
there is a need for experienced lecturers which comes at a
cost
.
Secondly
, it helps the
institution
to plan ahead and make proper planning as to how many students will be offered admission.
Also
, lecturers will attend to each
student
base
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based
on their ability and not generalize their efforts and
this
will improve the confidence level of each
student
.
Although
I agree with paying tuition
fees but
Accept comma addition
fees, but
it should be affordable.
This
view fails to consider the effect of these decisions to the
economy
as it will lead to so many drop outs and
thus
resulting to touts on the street
.
Accept space
.
They
also
fail to
realized
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realize
that students will not be motivated to return to
college
immediately after their high school and refer to these conditions as their excuses for not furthering their
education
.
On the contrary
, some argued that
college
education
should be free for everyone. They believed that making it available for all at no
cost
will motivate
student
to learn
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learning
which will improve the country‘s
economy
. Why I disagree with
this
view is that the
cost
of running
an
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a
higher
institution
cannot be underestimated because a good
university
requires good learning environments, experienced Lecturers and adequate learning equipment, all these
comes
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come
at a
cost
.
Also
, the quality of lectures received will reduced compared to a system where students are required to pay. It will be unfair to make
university
free for all
student
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students
because it will not be profitable for the
private
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privately
owned
university
. In conclusion,
education
system is very vital to any country’s
economy
and should be treated as
such
.
College
education
should come at a
cost
,
although
it must be affordable for all students in order for both
university
and students to receive value for their efforts and money.
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