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The given chart shows the total number of minutes of
telephone call
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telephone calls
a telephone call
in the
uk
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UK
form
a giver or sender
from
1995 to 2002.The information is given on
base
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a base
the base
of three modes of calling
1)
Accept space
1)
Local call by fix
line
Use synonyms
,
Accept space
,
(2) National and international call by fix
line
Use synonyms
& (
3)
Accept space
3)
Mobile calls.
the
Suggestion
The
graph show that local calls were improving from 1995-1998 but after 1999 it started
to decresing
Suggestion
to decrease
to decreasing
.National and international call on other the
othre
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
hand were steadily increasing from 1995 to 2002.Mobile calls were increasing most significantly from less than 5 minutes in 1995 to 37 minutes in 2002.Overall
genral
applying to all or most members of a category or group
general
observation of
chart
Suggestion
the chart
shows that local call
on
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to
fix
line
Use synonyms
were remain same during in 1995 and 2002 where international and national call by fix
line
Use synonyms
were
steadly
at a steady rate or pace
steadily
steady
incresing
becoming greater or larger
increasing
during given period and mobile call were
increse
Suggestion
increasing
increase
increased
increases
most
dramiticaly
in a very impressive manner
dramatically
during
given period
Suggestion
the given period
a given period
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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