Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by some that, both, the people with inadequate means and the ones that have more than enough find it hard to get admission into a university. I completely disagree with

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opinion and think that there are many significant challenges that a poor

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faces, which makes it many folds more difficult for him to obtain higher

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.

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of all, there is no common

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exam, which leads to filling multiple

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forms to have a higher chance of acceptance,

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requiring money which a poor

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cannot afford. With less means

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has to compromise and can only apply for

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exams that he can afford, decreasing his chances of getting selected, making it tough for a financially deficient

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.

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, My dad, who wanted to do engineering, could not do it because the

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exams and the tuition fees were expensive and his dad could not afford it.

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why it is more difficult for a person with mere means to get into college.

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, to support the family and their

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, impoverished students do odd jobs which gives them less time to prepare for

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exams. Earning money is essential for students like these to continue their

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education but

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education, but

spending time doing work that they should be spending studying affects their preparation for getting into college whereas people with enough means do not have to work and can get a tutor to prepare them for

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exams, giving

them an upper hand to those who cannot afford to have a tutor or spare time for the same.

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, a friend of mine who came from a very humble background had to do two shifts a day to support his school and family and in the midst of

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could not prepare for the

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exam. Where others were getting tuitions, he was working and

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ended up not performing well in the

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test.

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, having money gives an edge over those who do not have it

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made

it harder for a poor

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to get higher

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. To conclude, I firmly believe that a poor

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has to face several challenges which makes it very difficult for him to get admission into college.