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Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

#accessibility #university
It is argued by some that, both, the people with inadequate means and the ones that have more than enough find it hard to get admission into a university. I completely disagree with
this
 opinion and think that there are many significant challenges that a poor
student
 faces, which makes it many folds more difficult for him to obtain higher
education
.
First
 of all, there is no common
entrance
 exam, which leads to filling multiple
entrance
 forms to have a higher chance of acceptance,
thus
 requiring money which a poor
student
 cannot afford. With less means
student
 has to compromise and can only apply for
entrance
 exams that he can afford, decreasing his chances of getting selected, making it tough for a financially deficient
student
.
For example
, My dad, who wanted to do engineering, could not do it because the
entrance
 exams and the tuition fees were expensive and his dad could not afford it.
That is
 why it is more difficult for a person with mere means to get into college.
Secondly
, to support the family and their
education
, impoverished students do odd jobs which gives them less time to prepare for
entrance
 exams. Earning money is essential for students like these to continue their
education but
Accept comma addition
education, but
 spending time doing work that they should be spending studying affects their preparation for getting into college whereas people with enough means do not have to work and can get a tutor to prepare them for
exams giving
Suggestion
exams, giving
 them an upper hand to those who cannot afford to have a tutor or spare time for the same.
For instance
, a friend of mine who came from a very humble background had to do two shifts a day to support his school and family and in the midst of
this
 could not prepare for the
entrance
 exam. Where others were getting tuitions, he was working and
finally
 ended up not performing well in the
entrance
 test.
Thus
, having money gives an edge over those who do not have it
making
Suggestion
made
 it harder for a poor
student
 to get higher
education
. To conclude, I firmly believe that a poor
student
 has to face several challenges which makes it very difficult for him to get admission into college.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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