According to those in the travel business, the nature of the average 'holiday' is changing. Rather than seeking a relaxing break in a far-away place, people now want exitement on their holidays and are keen to participate in unusual and challenging activities. Do you agree or disagree?

The holidays greatly, influence the human nature. As a general fact seen since the trend change that people
nowdays
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now days
, are looking for activities that are full of
exctiment
the feeling of lively and cheerful joy
excitement
and fun rather than relaxing in faraway quiet town. I agree to the fact people
are
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is
more into
excitment
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the excitement
excitement
and fun during
holidays
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the holidays
to make
there
of them or themselves
their
time much more memorable and exciting. People all over the globe are looking for fun and
excitment
the feeling of lively and cheerful joy
excitement
.
Firstly
, to highlight the nitty-gritty details of
this
change that might have resulted because of
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
and
techonological
based in scientific and industrial progress
technological
advacements
encouragement of the progress or growth or acceptance of something
advancements
advancement
. Since, the movies and other media resources have highlighted the activities that burst the adrenaline rush and
thus
, develop the feeling of accomplishment.
Forexample
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For example
, activities like
sky-diving
performing acrobatics in free fall before pulling the ripcord of a parachute
skydiving
or scuba-diving push out the person to breaks the elastic zones of the limits and
therefore
, breaking the ice of fear that one has developed in his inert. The individual all over the world wants to utilize the
vacations
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vacation
time and make it memorable.
Secondly
, the sudden trend shift in the holiday season is due to the experiences the person shares in the life with friends and families making it a desire to be fulfilled.
For instance
,
visit
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a visit
to the
himilayas
a mountain range extending 1500 miles on the border between India and Tibet; this range contains the world's highest mountain
Himalayas
and mountain
climibing
an event that involves rising to a higher point (as in altitude or temperature or intensity etc.)
climbing
will bring in the
excitment
the feeling of lively and cheerful joy
excitement
and urge the desire to travel and look at the breathtaking beauty.
Similarly
, the activities promote a feeling of confidence and satisfaction that relaxes the person physically and psychologically. To conclude, the holiday’s trends have changed all over the world; with
transformation
Suggestion
the transformation
from relaxing to different activities. It is agreed that people are more into activities that brings change and can leave a long lasting memory.
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