You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practice in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: • describe what the group does • explain why the group is good for the community • suggest alternative days and times for practice
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Dear Mr Harris,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. As you are familiar with Cheki band which I am one of its members, used to practiced
on Tuesday and Friday Change the form of the verb
practice
evening
in Fix the agreement mistake
evenings
community
Add an article
the community
a community
hall
. Yesterday suddenly your assistance called me and she announced us
we are not allowed to use there anymore. all the members are really astonished.
Let me explain Change preposition
to us
you
in detail, why are we need Change preposition
to you
this
hall
.In fact
Add a comma
,fact
this
five-member group is a classic music band, as we are living in such
a cottage rooms
, we haven't a professional space to improve our skills .Correct the article-noun agreement
a cottage room
cottage rooms
furthermore
we are planning to make a fascinating album to publish our songs as soon as possible. besides
, Playing classic music in this
ancient hall
is caused to rise number
of visitors which are coming in every Tuesday and Friday.
According to your assistant suggestion, I am considering Change the article
a number
the number
to change
the days of performances if it's possible.
I am quietly obscure which days Change the verb form
changing
another
performances are running, Replace the adjective
other
However
, for our band
there seems no problem to set Add a comma
,band
sunday
and Wednesday morning as our meeting days. So, would you please indicate Change the capitalization
Sunday
us
about your Change preposition
to us
hall
free times? your assistance in this
matter is greatly appreciated.
Your
Sincerely,
Chi ChungCorrect your spelling
Yours
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