Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different opinions about ways of punishing individuals for crimes committed. While some persons think the penalty for criminal
offense
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offence
ought to be fixed irrespective of the reasons behind the act, others believe that punishment decision should be dependent on
reasons
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the reasons
and
insipirations
arousal of the mind to special unusual activity or creativity
inspirations
for committing it. In my opinion, the motivation and situation
for
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of
committing a crime must be considered
first
before making a judgment as some people are forced to
do
engage in
make
it out of poverty. Some people argue that there ought to be unchanged disciplinary actions for every criminal activity.
This
is because
this
is the only way to drastically reduce the number of crimes that are committed daily.
This
will discourage people, especially young adults to continue
this
worrisome lifestyle.
For example
,
Crimes Control Agency
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the Crimes Control Agency
in Nigeria, in 2018, announced 6 years in jail for any criminal caught in robbery and kidnapping attacks. For
this
reason, there is a rapid decline in the number of attacks since the announcement.
However
, there are other people who think that judgement decisions on offenders should be should be dependent on motivations and situations that caused the actions.
This
is due to the fact that a large number of people commit crimes because they are poor, which could be
as a result
of unemployment or lack of proper education. In the UK,
for instance
, citizens who
commits
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commit
crimes, especially robbery attacks are usually pardoned and release after every background
investigations
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investigation
are done. They always offer scholarships for interested convicted criminals to be educated, or grants are given to those who want to establish their own business. In my opinion,
although
criminals deserve a serious penalty in order to discourage continuous crimes, there are people who commit
offense
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offences
because they really need to survive.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, causes of what led to
this
must be checked before passing judgment in order to
safe
save from ruin, destruction, or harm
save
people who offend because of situations of life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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