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Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I have left my
bag
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 on my flight to London on the 23rd of November. I was seated in 20D and had two cabin bags and one handbag with me. During the deboarding process, I forgot about my second cabin
bag
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, which I had placed near seat 25C
due to
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 limited space. It was only when I arrived at my hotel that I realized my mistake. I tried calling your service
center
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, but I did not receive a satisfactory response. The missing
bag
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 is a black leather cabin
bag
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 from the brand Guess. It contains some clothing,
as well as
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 two pairs of Nike running shoes — one pair in red and the other in blue. I would appreciate it if you could forward
this
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 request to the appropriate team. Once the
bag
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 is located, please contact me
on
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 my registered phone number. I will be happy to come to the airport to collect the
bag
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. Thank you for your assistance. Sincerely, [Your Name]

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coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph focuses clearly on a single idea to further enhance coherence.
task achievement
To improve task achievement, consider including more specific details about the flight or airline, such as the flight number.
task achievement
The letter provides a clear and polite explanation of the situation, fulfilling the task requirements.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately chosen and professionally worded, with good formal tone throughout the letter.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Airliner, oversight, misplaced, personal belongings, valuable items, sentimental significance, luggage retrieval, lost and found, passenger service, tracking, compensate, verification of ownership, promptly, inconvenience, coordinate, verify, transparent communication
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