Some people believe that adults get motivated to exercise and play sports because of the major sports events such as the olympic games and the football worldcup. Others say that there are many ways apart from TV to encourage them to exercise. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is an undeniable fact that physical

acticity

any specific behavior

activity

and sport

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are

the key to healthy life.

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, in

this

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fast moving modern world, people often compromise on sports and exercises.

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, it is mandatory to motivate them for

such

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activities by some means. Some people believe broadcasting international sport events on

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is a great source to instil the spirit of sports in adults while others think there are better ways for doing so.

This

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essay will scrutinize both sides before forming an opinion. On the one hand,

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and

in particular

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, sports is being watched by a number of people all around the world. The international sports

such

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worldcup

an apartment in a building without an elevator

walk-up

involves various competitions and players or athletes. Many athletes are admired throughout their country and some even have fans overseas. Both adults and young follow these stars religiously and consider them their heroes. They want to emulate the way these stars look, act and live their

lives which

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lives, which

in turn encourages them to play sports and get physically fit.

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, a friend of mine started playing cricket after getting inspired by the famous Indian Cricketer, Sachin Tendulkar, who is loved by many.

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, the broadcast of international games could inculcate the feeling of patriotism in many and they might tend to become better at sports and follow a daily

exercise

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regime in order to give their optimum performance and win trophy for their country.

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does play an important role in pushing

indiviudals

a human being

individuals

out of their comfort zone and perform sports and exercises.

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, people who think there are better options to stimulate the spirit of sports in adults are

also

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justifiable as the fans of

athleses

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might get attracted by their fame and status

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of the actual sports.

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, more sports complexes and gyms could be established in the society with a minimal or no membership fee so more and more people are willing to do physical activity, as

cost

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the cost

and lack of facilities hinders many.

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, at workplaces or universities a 15 minute yoga or

exercise

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session can be introduced in their daily

cirriculum

an integrated course of academic studies

curriculum

or regime exactly like the PT period in school. By

alotting

give out

allotting

a fixed time for

exercise

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, more people are likely to do it.

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, sport events

such

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as sports gala and different races should happen

more frequent

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more frequently

instead

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of yearly basis only.

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, in my

opinion these

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opinion, these

are far more practical and better ways to help people engage in sports and physical work. In conclusion, people may vary in their opinion, I believe

for

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a healthy lifestyle, sports and

exercise

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is mandatory and

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is definitely not the best choice for

this

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. Rather, introducing more facilities and a mini

exercise

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session is more suitable.

Tue Sep 17 2019

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