Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.

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These days, various types of media are used to communicate different
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to the public
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as books, film, theatre and many others. The following essay will discuss the positive and negative sides of
television
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,
radio
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and comic books as media of communicating
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in details followed by a rational conclusion and my opinion about the most effective medium. Many people like
television
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because they can both hear the
information
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and see in visual which is a great way to convey messages to the mass people. Almost all
television
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channels have their own news programs and should there be a special event in the country, most of the people would watch the show and that makes TV as effective tools to deliver different messages to the people.
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, the Royal Wedding in the UK is watched by millions of people around the world, as they would not only hear the
news but
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news, but
they
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want to see the bride and the maid and the whole festival.
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,
television
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has its own weakness as it is not mobile and
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often fail to reach people. They are not easy to carry,
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people could watch
television
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in certain places only. Some people like the
radio
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because of its mobility and way of delivering messages to people.
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a lot of people consider it as old fashioned, several people still prefer listening to the
radio
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for obtaining useful
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. A lot of people are following the
radio
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while they are driving as they could get
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about the traffic condition or the weather forecast.
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, the drawback is that people who have problems with their hearing capability will have trouble in getting some
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from the
radio
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.
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several people think that comics are mostly for children, but many adults still like reading comics. As comic conveys messages in the form of stories and it attracts children and teenagers,
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it is an effective tool for delivering important messages to children and teens. Despite the positive side, a comic book has its own drawbacks, as the cost of producing comics is high and not all people like to read it. In my opinion, the most effective media for communicating
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would be the
radio
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. Even though it has some limitations,
radio
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is still the most beneficial tool because of its mobility. These days, radios are produced in smaller sizes,
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as the pocket
radio
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, which can be carried everywhere.
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