Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

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People have a hard time to register
to
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with
a
university
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nowadays whether they have
good socio-economic status
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the good socioeconomic status
good socioeconomic status
a good socioeconomic status
or they are unfortunate. The writer agrees with the statement and will mention the factors that affect inaccessibility of rich and poor people in universities. Students, even if they have enough budgets to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
in universities, may have factors that can hamper them in studying in
such
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type of schools. One of
this
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is the score requirement that the
university
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set in entrance exams in order for them to be qualified in the institution. Large numbers of students fail
this
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examination each
year making
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year, making
them disqualified to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
in the
university
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of their choice. Another possible reason is that universities are often established in city
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
. Because of
this
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, students from
far
being one more than three
four
provinces cannot have an easy access to universities. As an example, most of the people from the Province of Zambales in the Philippines tend to choose to study in colleges available in the area since the nearest
university
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is four-hours away. It would be very hard for them to live far away from their families Financial crises are very common problems a less fortunate person may have. Necessities of all family members are very important to be prioritized; one of
this
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is good quality education. A lot of poor individuals cannot prioritize to study in universities even if they want to, so they choose to study in colleges with cheaper
enrollment
the act of enrolling
enrolment
fees.
However
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, some unfortunate individuals do have relatives who are ready to help them achieve their dreams. They are the one whose financing all of the
university
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fees and even provide allowances. But, not all of them are lucky to have those kinds of relatives. Poor students can
also
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have the factors stated for the rich people as
addition
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an addition
for
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to
this
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. In conclusion, it is not just about money when it
come
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comes
to acquiring good quality education,
therefore
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all of the people, rich or poor, have an equal opportunity in studying in universities.
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