Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

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. I deeply regret the idea of shutting down

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centre because of financial reasons. Every member of my family greatly benefits from the outdoor swimming pool and the gym. I noticed that the game Instructor is well trained and happily coaches members of the various field games available in the

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, my friends and I will miss the beautiful and serene environment which we enjoy most of the evenings.

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has been a location for many parties and remarkable events held in the local

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created gainful employment for most of the residents in the local

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is the only tourist attraction site within

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area and it is one of the notable landmarks of the

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will affect the people negatively because most people will be unemployed.

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no other

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within the locality, due to

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, most people might not have the zeal to engage in any form of

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which is not safe.

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, there will not be any site for visitors to relax within the area. I hope you have a rethink towards closing the

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as it is the only one in the

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. Yours sincerely, Jake Brown

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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