Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

#council #sports #leisure #centre #money #friends #community #effects #people

Dear

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. shan, I am writing concerning the closure of the

sports

and

leisure

center

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. I deeply regret the idea of shutting down

this

centre because of financial reasons. Every member of my family greatly benefits from the outdoor swimming pool and the gym. I noticed that the game Instructor is well trained and happily coaches members of the various field games available in the

sport

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center

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However

, my friends and I will miss the beautiful and serene environment which we enjoy most of the evenings.

This

sport

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center

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has been a location for many parties and remarkable events held in the local

community

. The bar, restaurant and many other sections

has

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created gainful employment for most of the residents in the local

community

. Primarily, the

sports

and

leisure

center

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is the only tourist attraction site within

this

area and it is one of the notable landmarks of the

community

. Closing

this

center

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will affect the people negatively because most people will be unemployed.

Secondly

, there

are

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no other

sports

center

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within the locality, due to

this

, most people might not have the zeal to engage in any form of

sports

leisure

which is not safe.

Finally

, there will not be any site for visitors to relax within the area. I hope you have a rethink towards closing the

sports

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as it is the only one in the

community

. Yours sincerely, Jake Brown

Submitted by How on Tue Sep 17 2019

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8 paragraphs

237 words

6.50

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