Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

new world that we live in, a

lot

of improvement has been made in the area of trading with the set up and diversification of supermarket in some nations making local shops unable to compete in the race. Some individuals opine that the close down of local shops would bring about the stop in local society

growth

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grows

.

This

essay

intend

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intends

is intended

to support the above view and

profer

marked by suitability or rightness or appropriateness

proper

reasons why.

Firstly

, local shops

are associated

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is associated

with a

lot

of history and

comardeship

the quality of affording easy familiarity and sociability

comradeship

in small villages and towns.

This

is because a

lot

of them share history with the village.

This

makes it so essential in any small town.

For example

- some shops were opened the same year the town was established. And they are

know

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known

to have

foster

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fostered

a

lot

of relationships among the people in

such

villages.

Therefore foreclosure

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Therefore, foreclosure

of said shops would lead to a death in the strength of the community and socialisation.

Furthermore

, small shops are known to cater well to the needs of the minority or resource-poor communities.

This

is because they sell mainly to the consumer and at affordable

prices unlike

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prices, unlike

supermarket whose prices are fixed and at mostly high cost.

This

demonstrate

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demonstrates

is demonstrated

why these small shops are needed to stay for without them the masses would suffer.

Although

supermarket

bring

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brings

to a community variety in goods.

For instance

, foodstuffs and provision not available in small shops can be bought from them.

However these

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However, these

is

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are

a small ripple effect in the numerous advantages local shops

profer

like better; value more highly

prefer

. In conclusion, it is true that supermarkets are more and over-riding local shops in many nations today,

nevertheless

small

shops

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shop's

history, built

relationship

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relationships

a relationship

and affordability makes it

bad

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worse

if closed down as it would most likely bring about a

break down

the act of disrupting an established order so it fails to continue

breakdown

in local community set-up.