You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: •explain your situation •describe the accommodation you require •say when you will need it
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to request you find me a suitable place to stay for a short period in Greenmount City near Northern College in Northern Ireland.
I am a student at Algoma University in Canada and studying in a Science faculty.
Due to
the project, I have been working on for three months, I have been selected for further
training courses in Northern Ireland for two weeks. Despite, the country being new to me, it is quite hard for me to find accommodation. In addition
, I do not get any extra time to settle down my basic requirements.
Moreover
, due to
my introverted nature, I always prefer to live in a private room. Also
, my experiment which I will be there for training is crucial for me, therefore
, I would prefer to live in a quiet environment.
Most probably, my training session will be going to start on the 31st of October and I will arrive on the 29th of October in Ireland around 5 in the evening. Hence
, I would request you to book a room for 3 weeks from the 29th to the 16th of November.
I hope you will consider this
and assist me in finding a place to stay. I look forward to hearing a positive response from you.
Yours faithfully,
Harpreet Kaur.Submitted by harpreet291kaur on
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coherence cohesion
Try to organize your paragraphs in a way that maintains a logical flow throughout the letter. Consider revising the order in which you present information.
task achievement
Be sure to maintain a consistent formal tone throughout the letter, ensuring clarity and precision in each section.
task achievement
The letter clearly states the situation and the specific requirements for accommodation, fulfilling the task achievement criteria.
coherence cohesion
The letter uses an appropriate formal greeting and closing, enhancing the professional tone.
coherence cohesion
Clear separate paragraphs are used to present distinct ideas, contributing to higher coherence.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite