In some areas of the US, a ' curfew' is imposed,in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult . What is your opinion about This?
It is believed that in some areas of the US, where movement restriction is imposed, teenagers ought not to stay out late after a specified time. I agree with
this
statement because they are protected from harm and bad peers.
A good reason for this
is that teens are protected from accidents that could happen such
hours of the night
. During government imposed curfew times, teenagers found out of their home stand a higher chance of getting involved in car accidents, being by stray bullet, or raped by strangers. Also
, they get robbed of priced
possessions like mobile phone, laptop, expensive jewellery and money. hold dear
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For instance
, a teenage boy was kidnapped in my area last
month. Reports have it that he was sent on late
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errand unaccompanied by an older person. This
happened when a curfew was imposed in
my environment due to recent cult clash activities.
Another point to consider is they have the tendency to mingle with irresponsible friends. Suggestion
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This
is because, teens, when under undue pressure, lack the ability to take appropriate decisions. In otherwards,
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For example
, there has been a report in The US lately about sporadic shooting in a night
club in Los Angeles. Most victims where
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In conclusion, l believe that teens should observe imposed curfew time by the government, and should not be found out doors
at outside a building
outdoors
such
times alone. This
goes a long way to protect them from danger and bad friends.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite