Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that getting

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in universities are becoming tougher not only for financially poor but

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for wealthy students. I,

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, presume that economically weak students are facing

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reality rather than financially wealthier students. It is because poor students simply cannot fulfil two major selection criteria of the universities and colleges: university fees and outstanding grades. Prohibitively expensive fees that are required for

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have refrained thousands of students away from tertiary education. Based on the report recently issued by the US Department of Home Affairs, 80 percent of students who fail to get

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are from families who lack financial support. Even though governments in different countries have shown some concerns to solve

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issue by providing some educational loan, the aggregated cost will be so large in figure that students need almost 30

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period to completely pay back the loan;

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moreover

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, the interest rates are ridiculously high. Students are,

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, opt to find jobs after accomplishing high schools

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of bearing stresses generated from educational loan throughout their lives.

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,

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the requirement

of high grades for

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are in fact shattering the students’ dream of pursuing university education, and the matter of fact is that a large majority of

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students are from poor family. It is true that most of the outstanding students are produced from those high schools where the fees are extremely expensive as they need a large budget to hire genius educators.

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, only wealthier students can only afford it and in turn they pass out with excellent grades who are apt to get

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in universities. In conclusion, it is mostly the poor students who are restricted from the pursuit of higher education since they are unable to cover the ridiculously expensive cost of university fees; meanwhile, they

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have low high school grades, as compared to the grades obtained by their wealthier counterparts, which is

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very important selection criteria.