Some people say that mobile phones are unnecessary for young group while others find that its useful for younger ones discuss both views and give your opinion

It is a debatable issue whether mobile phones are good for teenagers or not.

some

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Some

individuals argued that it is unnecessary for

young group

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young groups

a young group

the young group

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However

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I favour the ones who opine that it is useful for young ones. I will discuss both the conflicting arguments in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, some people argued that mobile phones are bad things for children. There are quite reasons behind

this

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First

and foremost is children give more attention to mobile phones rather than studies and social activities

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To be more precise

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if more students spend their time on mobile phones,

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

their academic performance will be low. A research is carried out in

this

direction revealed that 90% of the students who uses the mobile phone at

tremendous rate

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a tremendous rate

tremendous rates

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they are often weak in their academic field.

Moreover

, teenagers see many vulnerable activities on

internet

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the internet

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In other words

, it will encourage them to attain bad habits

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on

their own.

For instance

, many advertisements are presented on

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YouTube

and social sites based on vulnerable activities, it encourages them to do same and become

culprit

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the culprit

of society.

However

, I favour the ones who reckon that mobile phones are good for the development of teenagers

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One

of the most vivid

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reasons

is mobile inculcate motor skills in children.

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They

do a lot of practical activities on it which they cannot attain from other resources rather than technological gadgets

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To exemplify

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most

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mostly

of young children spend their time on playing games on phones which teaches them to handle the situation. When they play puzzle games, it will boost their level of thinking and try to solve

this

by various ways.

Besides

this

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mobiles are

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the source

of vast knowledge. Nowadays, most of the children use

internet

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the internet

on mobiles, it will help them to understand the academic topics as well as other social topics. Due to

this

, they can get profound knowledge about any topic

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For example

, if they use

internet

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the internet

in their

studies they

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studies, they

will get 20% more marks than others who do not use. To recapitulate, after analysing aforementioned, it can be deduced that

although

other individuals think that mobile phones influence them to walk on bad

path but

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path, but

I believe that it is

necessary thing

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a necessary thing

for young children leads them to get achievements.