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Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do u agree or disagree?

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It has been proposed that global sportive events,
such
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 as, football and
Olympics
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the Olympics
 are quite helpful in normalizing the diplomatic crisis among the nations. Not only that, these events are of vital importance in providing a way to dissipate the emotions, which individuals usually possess for the love of their countries.
This
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 essay will provide evidence in support of the
afore mentioned
being the one previously mentioned or spoken of
aforementioned
 concept and the final position will be declared in the conclusion section of
this
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 discussion. Nowadays, it can be witnessed that there is an exponential rise in disputes among various nations, all over the world. There is
multitude
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a multitude
 of underlying factors for
this
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,
such
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 as, wars
an
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a
backlashes
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backlash
 over economic gains. The leaders of countries, in order to attain their goals and highlighting their rightfulness of opinions try to manipulate the emotions of the
lay man
someone who is not a clergyman or a professional person
layman
: of their own as well as of the
opponent
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opposing
country
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, by giving speeches with international media coverage. As a consequence of practice like
this
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 there is noticeable escalation in civic virtues among the general populations. So everyone wants to do something
for for
appropriate to; intended for
for
 the love and welfare of his
country
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 by putting
his efforts in
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his efforts
. In order to serve one’s
country
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 and to prove his loyalty and support, people need a forum. Obviously
,
Accept space
,
 not everyone could go
on
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to
 war. So there must be some right way without any catastrophic results.
Therefore
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, sportive festivals
provides
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provide
 a great opportunity to the patriotic to express
there
of them or themselves
their
 devoted love for their
country
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. Where they can openly express their selves in support and in
oppose
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opposing
: for
there
of them or themselves
their
 own and opponent
country
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, respectively.
Thus
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, events
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such like these are
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like these are such
great route
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a great route
great routes
 to be emotionally honest without any harmful consequence. After
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
 the above, it can be concluded that sportive occasions are essential for preventing the diplomatic ties of breaking due to international tensions and providing a way out to the bottled up emotions to be released. It is for these reasons, I completely agree with the statement provided.
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