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Should Newspaper not publish personal life of Politicians. DO you agree or disagree.

#newspaper #life #politicians
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It is often argued that print media should not cover the personal
life
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 of a political person.
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 statement and believes that everyone should
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have
 the primary
right
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 of privacy and it may cause
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a threat
 to lives of politicians and their families.
In
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After
 almost every constitution,
right
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 to privacy is the basic
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 and politicians should
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 have the same. We are the social being and do not like to share all aspects of our personal
life
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 with everyone. Political leaders are
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 part of common people and they must
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 have the
right
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 to keep their personal matters without sharing with
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the common public
. Some leaders may not feel comfortable when newspapers publish about their personal relations with others and may leave the public services. Recently,
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, home minister of South Africa resigned from his post because
media printed
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media, printed
 his personal relations with a lady other than his wife. Publicizing the private
life
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 may cause a threat to the
life
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 of politicians and their families. Politicians make laws in every country and most of the laws are not welcomed by
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the general public
. Laws and regulations basically restrict or guide certain activities and may affect some people. These people may get the personal information from publications and harm the politicians and their near ones.
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, as per Times of India, 60% personal threats to leaders and their families are made by getting information from the media. In conclusion, I think that politicians’ private
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 should not be covered by newspapers as they must have the
right
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 to privacy and their private lives' information may be used to harm them.

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