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The advantages and disadvantages of using e-books?

#e-books
One
 of the greatest accomplishments of
this
 day and age is the Internet, which enabled us to share information with the world. Anyone can read an online book or attend a class from home,
this
 advancement in technology has led many people to prefer e-books over
paper
 books.
This
 essay will discuss the pros and cons of using e-books compared to
paper
 books. The two main advantages of using e-books are the accessibility of e-books and the great decrease in
paper
 manufacturing and
paper
 waste. In o
thers
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
words,
one
 may need to drive or pay for a public transportation in order to go to a bookstore and buy a
paper
 book compared to downloading an e-book in his home.
Moreover
,
paper
 manufacturing has a great impact on changing forests and changing the biodiversity, owing to that
one
 must be aware of his
paper
 usage. By encouraging the use of e-books
instead
 of
paper
 book we can as a society control the process of
paper
 manufacturing as well as decreasing the amount of
paper
 waste.
On the other hand
, using e-books h
as
Suggestion
have
a few disadvantages
such
 as the violence of c
opy rights
a document granting exclusive right to publish and sell literary or musical or artistic work
copyrights
that some writer suffers from and that reading from a mobile or a computer
screen
 can increase
one
's
screen
 time, which proved to be harmful. Through most of the websites that sell e-books are aware of the c
opy right
a document granting exclusive right to publish and sell literary or musical or artistic work
copyright
and its legal issues there are some websites that distribute the e-books for free.
This
 act can harm the writer and the publishing agency directly and cause serious consequences for the website owners.
Also
, many studies have proved the physical harm caused by spending long hours looking at a
screen
 daily.
Thus
, by reading books on
screen
 we might can harm more than good. In conclusion, the trend toward using e-books can help the environment and made reading easier.
However
,
one
 must pay attention to his daily
screen
 exposure and to the websites he chooses to buy books from.
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