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More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are possible solutions?

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Many individuals living in
developed
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developing
 countries are buying vehicles for the
first
 time.
This
eassay
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
 will discuss the difficulties caused by
increasing
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the increasing number
an increasing number
number
 of cars on the road and proffer possible remedy to it. One serious problem brought about by the growing
number
 of cars on the road is air pollution.
This
 is mainly due to carbon monoxide emission from these automobiles into the atmosphere
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which is a poisonous gas and
leading cause
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a leading cause
the leading cause
 of air pollution in the cities.Another issue to consider is that
growing
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a growing number
the growing number
growing numbers
number
 of vehicles lead to traffic congestion on major roads.
in
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In
 other words
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,
commuters find it tiring to get to their destination on time
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which makes life in the city boring and unbearable.
For example
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New York city is known all over the world for
it's
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its
 long traffic that can
last
 for hours
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.
 There are two possible solutions to the problem of raising
number
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the number
 of motor vehicles on the road.
Firstly
, government can increase the duty on importation of cars
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.
This
 implies that many people will be discouraged from paying
such
 exorbitant amount and would prefer to use the subways and public buses to get to work
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which will go a long in reducing the
number
 of vehicles on the roads.
Thus
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contributing to cleaner air.
Also
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government
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the government
 can hike the price for parking space in the city
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and make it unbearable for many to enjoy driving on their private vehicles. In conclusio
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,increasing the importation duty on cars will drastically reduce the
number
 of people buying cars
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